This was a great story! It had a really nice ending. Only thing that stuck out to me was dean; I mean I kinda would have expected him to try to help Sam with the monster and protect him and all but nonetheless you still delivered a well written story!

Very ice. I like your imagination. You may have slappe the crap out of ean y wrote good story about it.

Great Dean finds a new kind of monster, in a hospital, in his room around his bed. He always calls Sam a Monster magnet. I believe that's an example of the old pot calling the kettle black, isn't it?

Oh dear. Have we just found something else that would like a bite of Dean as a midnight snack?

Sam gallops to the rescue. Dean is so lucky his brother loves him so.

That is a terrible place to take a nap. Get up Dean. A least sit up and get your face off the concrete.

Dean is having hallucinations, I hope. He's in no condition to fight monsters or even stiff necked nurses.

Looks like Dean is about to join the party. Get ready for some Winchester attitude.

Step away from the Impala and get your foot off her. She might bite.

Dean wants Sam and that's the end of it. Little brother is not going anywhere.

Sam is bleeding all over his paperwork. So sad. Now Dean is tearing up the examination room. Hello hospital! Winchesters are visiting.

Great story! I loved the bait and switch with Ursula. It almost seems like he writers read your story for season 7 Leviathans! Instead of vinegar, they used Borax. Hmmm?
I hope you were compensated. ;)

loved it! :-) good one :-) loved the doctors the nurses, not too complicated case and bobby is in too in a way :-) hope to read more :-)

Very cool story!
Dede

Oh my...! I LOVED THIS STORY! I think my favorite part was baby having a mind of her own and revving her engine at the car that almost hurt her, Sam and Dean on the way to the hospital. I wish the writers would put that in the show- baby protecting the boys! Love it!