Almost. Ahhhh *dies* this was so...angsty. And delicious and just shut up and kiss him mick! So perfect! Thank you for this. It was beautiful and heart breaking and just yes.

Oh my! This is utterly lovely. Romantic and sad and yet there's a *tiny* hint of hope that Josef will get what he wants someday.

I really like this story. So much tension from what Josef wants and can't get. Great emotion.

wow!:3 That was awesome. sigh, stupid Beth and Mick have zip in common and it makes me pissy to know those two have fanbases out there for yeah when she does finally die (mekillingherrightnow!)mawhaha, our Josef is finally free to RULE ALL! I see our fav twosome sometimes as brothers like the show was originally headed for wink wink* But by the end of the series it was Josef/Mick yaoi all the freaking away! But yay I really liked the story good job.

Very nicely written. I love the emotion that you applied because it leaves the reader very able to empathise with my favourite character, Josef! Thank you for sharing, it was a great story )

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Wow, great stuff! Really powerful. I'd love to read more from you.

very very good.

WOW, that was heavenly. So very well done, SO HOT. And so very sad too. When I saw that scene in the show I knew it was doomed. It was one of the most erotic things I have ever seen on broadcast TV. ANd how could CBS leave such a slashy show on TV. It amazes me that NCIS and Criminal Minds are still on...

But seriously this was perfection. Just beautifully done. And, I think, in character too. Very much so. Congrats. Very well done.

Awesome description, that scene was indeed scorching hot.

Added to favorites!

There is something so tantalizing about Mick and Josef together and this was just great! And it was taken from the perfect scene! I think when I was watching it, I said to myself "oh there will be fanfics about THIS!" And thankfully there is! Woo hoo! Very nice!

Great job! I loved Josef's thoughts, they was perfect. I hope you continue!

I'm left amazed by the depth and quality of this story. Josef is a fascinating character. On the show, we get glimpses of what he allows outsiders to see. You plunged way past the intruiging surface, and explored his character beautifully. Yes, that turning WAS erotic, and there was, yes, sexual energy in that room, at least that's how I saw it. But you went so much further, and revealed aspects of their friendship, gave it a different hue. Congratulations, you have an excellent piece of fanfiction on your hands.

Purfect !

Fab job! This was amazing!

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