Very very sad and nice fic, I've always liked Matthew and Serra, and this fanfiction is really good.

I hoped too, that Priscilla would find her but...her death "improve" your fic, in a certain way.

Really, Matthew had the worst luck of the world, seems like revenge would be the last thing to keep he alive now.

Ooh, well-written! Character Death is easier to write about in Fire Emblem compared to other series, since depending on how good a tactician you are, it tends to happen every once in a while anyway... Poor Matthew, though, having to relive the worst moment of his life! In many ways, Serra is his savior, replacing the painful memories with the good. I like that you compare her heavily with Leila, bringing home the simile. Using Jerme also adds a concrete setting to what would otherwise be a timeless ficlet. Nice job!

So. Sad. Ah, I was hoping that in the end, maybe Priscilla would find them and heal her or something...!

I wasn't expecting that Serra actually would die and somehow, I think that it was kind of refreshing. There isn't a lot of MatthewSerra fanfictions here and I think it's too bad. MS is a beauitful pairing, and if you ever have the time or the courage, read mine. It's old and has mistakes, but a week ago, I started to play the game again and maybe I will get the energy to write a new one!

Lovely, hopefully you will write a new fanfiction about these two son :D

love,

nazzy

That was really sad adn awesome at the same time. I never would have even CONSIDERED MatthewxSerra, but it's actually a very god pairing. I hate Jerme now, though... thank you, Matthew, for finishing him off...

Nice job on creating a parallelism between Serra and Leila, it was nice touch there. Tragic yes but the woe seemed quite appropiate for this situation.