I really liked the way that this story was written. I myself write this way on occasion, but your example of it is nigh on perfect. Congrats on such a beautiful piece.

-Masq

this was ab-so-lu-te-ly freaking AMAZING~~! Pure and utter poetry in the form of a story. Epic. Wonderful. The perfect amount of love between Ulquiorra and Grimmjow. The ending had to be the greatest ending of all time. Superb! There is no way to sum this all up! Your talent...wow. This was perfect. Thank you for such an amazing fic. :)

Wow, this was seriously impressive. There is something almost Stephen King-like in how you express emotions as unconnected words. Really, really good. Thank you for writing this- it is amazing.

I completely disagree with Vicious-Loner; I understood it perfectly the first time around.

The style is absolutely beautiful, and it forces the reader to stop and actually read every individual word lest they miss something amazing, instead of simply skimming over the paragraphs and absorbing the significant words (as I myself usually do). I applaud and thank you for this, because that is what it deserves.

I'll admit that I'm hesitant to reread it, however; for some reason I get the feeling it'll lose some of its luster if it's merely being repeated.

Shit...! Once again, your writing is amazing. So beautifully descriptive, it drives me insane! XD Great job!

Wow, I really liked this. It takes a few readings to get the full meaning of it, but I guess that's why it appealed to me. I loved the way the allegory fit in the background, but wasn't obvious enough to be obnoxious. Good job.

The only thing is, the formatting is a bit weird, but I'm guessing that's 's fault. I miss my asterisk dividers!

I didn't understand crap of what was going on, if you were aiming for 'less coherent' then you did a pretty good job at it. I couldn't quite find any thread to follow, something that kept the story together and it's left me confused and unsatisfied. There's no harm in trying new things but I can't really say I understood this one. Better luck next time I suppose

This is the first GrimUlqui fic I've ever read, and i am so glad that i did because this is just beautiful.

I've always had a fascination with these two Espadas and GrimUlqui is my ultimate OTP in Bleach (_). Reading this story made my heart ache for them and I am so glad you put in Ulquiorra's loyalty/relationship (or whatever he has) with Aizen, and Grimmjow's thoughts about the sun, moon and God... it was just, so brillant. And the poetry part didn't hurt either. :)

(I just found the formatting a bit weird, or was it really supposed to be that? )

But overall, this just made me love GrimUlqui even more, I hope you make more about them in the future. Thank you for writing this. _

I wuv this! Best couple ever!

I read this about three separate times before it came to , but I still love it regardless.

Well... hi! before reviewing properly y must point out something... you rated the fic as Spanish which is good 'cause there's no GrimmUlqui in Spanish and bad 'cause it's in English owo

Besides that it was nice, I liked it, the narrative, te sequence which seemed to be in disorder and turned out to be a perfectly and amazingly told story. I really liked it. Hope you write more like this (GrimmUlqui) maybe a happy ending one hehe

The comparing between what happens and how cosmos and the universe works was AWESOME really

Great job!

First, I want to apologize for my poor english.

Second, say to you that your fic seemed to me very amazing, I liked very much, though I had to read it several times to understand completely well (-Well, The English is my third language and... eh xD I believe that we continue being enemies yet xD-).

I've liked very much the perspective in which you have narrated the one shoot, and I've proposed me xD (eh... xD I Think i'm destroying a language) to read all your other fics.

I don't know what more I can say... so... Congratulations for your fic, it was awesome, really (dattebayo xD)

Ciao!