I really liked the friendship you displayed between Ino and Chouji, and I loved how you explored the importance Ino places on beauty now that she's not twelve anymore - beauty cultivated as a ninja tool instead of for mere vanity :) it's sad but it's very fitting for a shinobi.

I really like this. Chouji's NESS was just lovely.

Wow, the beginning was really sad - shockingly realistic. Ino's feelings, her doubts, her morbid need to be pretty...

I was really, really relieved that Chouji managed to get her back on the right way in the end.

Very well done!

Oh, that was awesome! :D

Interesting and wonderful. I like the idea of it.

Inner beauty. Outer beauty.

Even without you aaking to review if I felt inclined, I would have. It's a nice piece of writing.

Aww, that was lovely. It was sad that Ino spent entire years pretending, for the sake of her mission. Her sense of self must really have been tested back then, but she still didn't lose herself so much that she couldn't regret what she's become.

The part with Chouji was so touching! If Chouji were to give her his last chip, it does indeed show that she's worth something. :D

Yay! Platonic Chouji/Ino fanfics! I didn't even know that such existed. :D

Anyways, this is quite the nice short fanfic that I was looking for all this time. There isn't enough out there on platonic relationships and perspectives on actual beauty, so...yeah. Awesome work here! Keep it up!

I found your story well thought out. I liked it a lot.

Thank you for posting it.

P.C

That was very good. I hope you do more. We need more ChoujiXIno in the world.

I love it. It has depth, it is realistic and sweet. I also liked your style of writing. Very good.