Love! Thanks for sharing your passion with us. You write so well. I read this in just a few hours. Haven’t read one like it.

Awww, that was a cool story. And I'm glad the tiger found its way home, just like Raph.

I definitely think you could lower the rating. It's not an N rating in my opinion. But if you wanna keep it up that's fine.

Good job writing this. It was good. Thumbs up for sticking to it. :)

It's interesting that his dreams always center around Leo.

OoooOOOOOHhhHhhh... that was a really good ending line. That'd scare him crapless.

Did they get the stitches yet?

Yay! Casey!

Awwww poor Raph.

Nah, I don't really consider this to be M. I've read way more horrifying T fics before.

This was a fantastic story! What well thought out description of what it means to be human. You had all the turtles perfectly in character, and their interactions were spot on, as was the way in which Raph dealt with the aftermath of his captivity. Well done on this!

Just awesome! Awesome!

I just laughed so hard! Thanks for that!

Considering how old this is, and will probably be never revised again there are quite a few grammatical errors that did need to be fixed.

I'm not sure "unreality" is really a word...it is very jarring.

The is also the fact you said Leo wants to get naked apparently. Bare is naked, Bear is to shoulder a burden.

Really great combination of everything I love about the TMNT universe. Good read!

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Poor Raph! The writing has definitely improved, but pleeeeeeeeeeease no swearing! Really. I can't enjoy a fanfiction as much when it has nasty words and I don't see how they add to the plot of the story. Or even the emotions. Yeah, Raph is angry, but I don't think he has to talk like that for everyone to know it. Please cut down on the language. BTW, things were confusing at first because at times it seemed rushed and sometimes slow, but everything flows together mush more smoothly now.