| Reviews for Work in Progress |
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King Pepperony chapter 5 . 9/23/2018 Great story! I loved it! |
wanderlustnyc chapter 5 . 6/15/2018 Yay! Another great read that had me smiling at the end. Wasn't expecting that but nice nonetheless. Good job! Now on to #3! |
wanderlustnyc chapter 3 . 6/15/2018 Hahahaha! Pepper's brother-in-law and her sister's reaction. In chapter 2 though, I dunno how I feel about the adoration like a little bro bit. Seems kinda weird, esp when they were kinda flirtatious before he was kidnapped. Or well that's how I see it. Though maybe you took a different route here, which is fine...though still a bit weird for me. Haha. |
nancyozz chapter 5 . 12/14/2014 Holy Crap! Totally didn't see the lunch ending this way at al! Love it! |
nancyozz chapter 4 . 12/14/2014 Love the way you write their conversations |
nancyozz chapter 3 . 12/14/2014 Can't really blame Peppers family's for busting her chops about Tony alittle bit...at least they didn't scream in horror |
nancyozz chapter 2 . 12/14/2014 Liked this chapter but disagree with two things...pepper never loved Tony in a sibling type of way...and Tony never stopped flirting with her ever lol |
nancyozz chapter 1 . 12/14/2014 Awww...what a sweet morning after |
fantasia-49 chapter 5 . 1/29/2013 ohhhhhh i love it really especially the end and also the conversation between pepper and her sister in the last chapter hi hi! Can't wait to read the next story! |
lifechiaroscuro chapter 5 . 10/16/2012 Wow. Great fic! Caity :) |
Beguilingirl chapter 5 . 7/2/2012 excellent set yet again. consider me a new fan. |
mg513 chapter 5 . 8/6/2011 Woah thought it was just lunch but the unexpected happwn xD |
RaeAnne chapter 5 . 10/7/2008 Can I just right now, awesome. Yep, awesome, totally and utterly without real words in my vocabulary to express it-awesome. |
Quill-32 chapter 5 . 7/17/2008 Well, THAT was unexpected. Fun, though! He's right, he never does do things by halves. |
Phoenix Fanatic chapter 5 . 6/28/2008 The ending was quite unexpected, as the chapter title points to. :P But it was still good! |