Oooo Love it! Love the twist!

Best story ever!

The irony.

Jenny! :D love it, really good

very sad...and unfortunately the way i reckon they'll take Rose away again. But it's a wonderful bit of writing.

I. loved. this. "He never believed in fairytales, and her heart's too broken to try."

Beautiful.

Breaking. My. Heart.

How cruel of you. But cruel in a rather beautiful, poetic away. And with the "oh, clever" factor thrown in at the end, heh. I think every word in this was perfectly placed, and I liked where you chose to split it. I think it worked well. And lines like, "She can’t look at him, he can’t take his eyes off her, and he wonders how he ever got along without her." were painful, but scarily right. Nice.

SHINEY! *_*

((But then, yours tend to be...))

Beutiful.

And that's all that can be said, really.

Keep writting.

Emma

v. good. Loved it (I was thinking this aswell) :)

Now you've gone and made me want to cry. Curse you. -runs away sobbing-

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*disolves into sobs*

Wow, Great oneshot )