| Reviews for Gasp |
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   Shirubagure chapter 1 . 11/18/2013 Kanda why would you do that?! D: Don't cheat on Allen! Allen needs someone to love him and not just fake love him! You better love Allen for real or I will kill you and Lavi. :I Seriously, Allen's crying for f***s sake! Please tell me Allen did not misheard that word... ;A; I read something kind of similar to this but it was Lavi cheating on Allen. :I |
| OhWyrm chapter 1 . 10/19/2013 Kanda you lying cheating fucking basturd! How could you screw around with Lavi while Allen was crying!? You jerk! You don't deserve Allen! Lavi! What fuckery did you use to get Kanda to cheat on Allen!? Huh!? Tell me you asses!... Sorry.. It's ok Allen. I'll buy you lots of ice cream and you'll forget about BaKanda and the baka usagi. You'll find somone better. More chapters with Lenalee kicking Lavi and Kanda's asses for Allen's sake? Please? I beg of you please. Please please please please. I'm friggin' on my knees man! Please? By the way, it will be a good story if you add more. The plot is great! Keep up the good work! |
| MissyRainDrop chapter 1 . 1/13/2013 kanda? WHY?! I hate both kanda and Lavi now, Which I'm perfectly fine with since Allen's my favorite character. BUT WHY KANDA?! If you could or have time, another chapter? pwes? :3 Loved the story! |
| ofnisaofunsdf chapter 1 . 6/10/2011 this makes me sad... :( |
| Moyashi.beansprout chapter 1 . 4/23/2010 Aw! So cute! |
| Alhena-star chapter 1 . 7/3/2009 Oh, Poor Allen! Kanda is so sexy but why cant he keep his trousers! Why is he cheating on Allen? Anyway, I really liked it. Bye |
| Baniita chapter 1 . 12/8/2008 BAW- (Tears.) It would suck if Allen misheard it. :C PLEASE TELL ME HE DIDN'T MISHEAR. ; _; I loved the angst, by the way. (I hope Lavi burns in hell. D8 ) (Unless, that is.. you like LaviYuu. D: ) (Please tell me you don't.) |
| ItachiIsReallyByakuya chapter 1 . 10/1/2008 what is with you and your stupid sad stories? |
| scatteredbutterflies chapter 1 . 8/23/2008 Awe. That was so sad. T.T I liked it, though. |
| iruka92 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008 Why oh WHY? You're making me into hating Lavi! |
| blacksta1n chapter 1 . 8/17/2008 thats so sad... sweet.. but sad |
| Cross - The Damned Alchemist chapter 1 . 8/11/2008 Oh... tha... Is so... Sad... Nnrrff..! Poor Allen... But... atleast Kanda's still thinking about him... I liked it though... *sob* big brother: Stop it, runt, you're soaking the sheets. You don't have to always get so damn emotional. me: Thanks, big bro... TT~ |
| antidegenerate chapter 1 . 7/24/2008 oh i really liked this one- short, but oh so emotional.. it'd be nice if you updated this one ] |
| ThunderRiver411 chapter 1 . 5/28/2008 Nice story. I'm working on a crossover. If you want to check it out sometime feel free to. |
| asdg chapter 1 . 5/9/2008 Ooh scandalous |
