Reviews for Ending the Pain
satomika chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
Ayyyiiieee!

Nice!

I love it! :)
RisingMist chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
I sort of liked this story. I liked the idea. The lemon was okay, but somewhat unnecessary. Your story would do equally well, if not better, without it. I also think that Naruto and Hinata's feelings weren't sufficently explored.

Thanks for sharing your work.
Uzumaki Ricky chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Nicely done!
Major Session chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Freaking epic man. Just wow. I must go read more of your work.
balllle chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
naruto is soooooooooooo lucky. I love this lemon lime story.
kiuibi123 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
AWSUM! AWSUM AWSUM AWSUM AWSUM!
Cherokee chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Fucking hot! I love a man who eats! I'm fucking horny right now!
Etheakay chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
wow that wasn't a complete leom, but damn that was hawt!

adds to fave stories and authors!
naruhina-fanboy-devlin chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
very good u should make a sequel
dragonforce119 chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
you should make a sequel that was brill 5 stars
Valheim chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
pritty good fic, i liked. but u said hinata twice on the last line. XD
xxWeaponxxMistressxxAyamexx chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
i have read all of your storys aleast 20 times. keep writing. btw i was wondering if you could write a neji n tenten lemon with that briliant mind of yours well any ways! Great Jod!
taintedlegacy chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Nice lemon...I loved it.
Narutomaniac chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Nice though you said Azuma instead of Asuma. Also...I think Hinata should have reciprocated the oral out of thanks, as well as I'd think she'd REALLY want to.
angeliccus chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
really liked it ...
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