Damn this story is intense

Holy fuck that was intense right up until the end. I wish it were continued. I wanna know what L thought after Light said that. I really wanna know if he'd ever let him go. That was so so cool omg.

I love how Light refuses to look at L, clinging to the hope that L still might let him leave even now. Though you might also say that Light doesn't want to put a face to the person who has done all this to him, even though, having felt his kisses and seen how petty he is, he already knows L is very human. Such a messed up fic, though. I love it.

Fantastic.

Great story! Brilliantly written.

This story was utterly perfect. Normally I dont enjoy torture fics, but this ff seemed more concentrated on the changes in Ls and Lights “relationship“. I love how Light completely captivates Ls attention.

I wish you would continue it but I can understand that you didnt. I cant imagine how it would continue and especially how their relationship would further evolve. Would L free Light if they captured Misa? How would Light be changed, when returning to more normal circumstances (for surely L still wouldnt let him out of his sight)? And of course Light would still be Kira (unless L keeps him long enough for Light to lose ownership of the Death Note?) and probably try to kill L especially after everything that happened between them.

This story has great potential but at the same time seems terrible complicated to continue while still doing the first part just.

Maybe I could spark an idea for this story with my review (I hope so anyways)

This story packs a punch. The intensity of the feelings and thoughts was conveyed easily to the reader and the sheer level of intellect that went into crafting each word of this story is to be praised. You certainly have a way with words that does L and Light justice.

The inclusion of Ryuk and his little comments was a bonus as well, especially that ending. A very open-ended one, but it leads me to the conclusion that the day they see each other, really see each other, is going to be the day they both die. Of course, that's just one of many ways to take it, but the bittersweet of that idea appeals. A sort of 'no winners, no losers' kind of feel.

Amazing piece of fanfiction and it's hard to find such a level of story-telling. Thank you for taking the time to write and share this in the first place~ And I am glad to have read it because it's certainly going to make me wonder about 'alternatives' in the Death Note storyline from now on and what could have happened. 'What if's are truly fun to read.

This is really good! I wish I knew what happened in the end. Why don't you continue it? Write another chapter or something :) Loved it! Favourited~!

Amazingly hot and breath taking

It's bittersweet in its own way and is one of the best Death Note fic I've ever read

Write more

This was a really interesting one-shot. I liked the whole blind-folded thing. It was very good!

Woah, that was awesome. Really intense, and so, so eloquent. It felt like everytime Light or L's pulse quickened, mine did as well, and I really love the idea of this kind of love/hate relationship between them. I lack the verbal skills to praise you adequately, so I think "woah" will have to do for now.

Also, I'm not sure if all your fics are like this, but so far, they've all left me longing for more (literally) (or perhaps not so literally) (actually, that last paranthesis was stupid - scratch that)... which in turn makes me feel very, very happy in a giggly fangirl-kinda way XD Thank you, again, for another very pleasurable stoy.

Wow, this was utterly beautiful. The whole premise is so dark and the storyline felt so RAW. This is definitely A material.

This is one of those pieces that leaves me breathless. I'm sighing for more. It's so poignant and tastefully woven with irony and sensuality. Beautiful.

O_o...

This is disturbing, but I like the way both characterw were portrayed.

Eh ? That was...all ? Bloody shit, I was waiting for something, ANYTHING next ! You can't just leave it like that, can you ?

Is there at least, or is there going to be, a sequel ?

I was totally in the story, god. I feel smacked of the face and frustrated right now. I don't thank you. Very nice one, though.