Nicely done. You write the two of them very well. And I must say, as different as it was, I liked the format a lot. It worked very well here.

Cheers,
Jimelda

Excellent job! No spelling errors (that I noticed), and you handled changing POVs, the characters' relationships/emotions, and B R's commitment issues brilliantly. I also loved the "two sides of Barney" thing - very creative. The only thing wrong that I noticed was incorrect/changing past/present tense language here and there, but otherwise, AWESOME!

Hot(; I loved it(:

This is so good, I wish this had happened in the actual show. D

Squee! YAY Barney/Robin-ness. This was excellent. I really enjoyed the different sort of format to it, and everything in general. There was one line that made me grin so wide and I would say is the best of the fic, if not of all the HIMYM fics I've been reading the past few days:

"None of them are you, Robin," he smiles – the one he reserves for really awesome things, like laser tag and talking about Lost - and before she can respond, he has his hand in her hair and he's leaning towards her again."

Just, all of it. Him being so sweet, the hand and hair thing, and the mention of Lost.

Loved it!

~Red

I loved it:)

Loved this so much! I think I read it awhile ago but forgot to review, so I reread it now. Anyway, I thought you pulled off the structure of this really well, and they're so in character the whole time. Funny lines- "Actually, Robin, I was contemplating blog titles," and "Bro... friend. Brofriend?" made me laugh. Great job!

You said you were worried about your writting style but I gotta say it works well, glad you took the risk.

you're awesome. :)

Damn, this is l6 levels of hot! My favorite is the last one. ]