I love how you wrote the scene. In-character and subtle

yeah, you have more than 100 stories and you don't think you're super talented? my god you're really REALLY talented ;]

Another great Sweeney fanfic from you! :-)

Lizzie

amazinly good written :D

and the characters are very real ;D

This was quite stunning.

"All good things may come to those who wait, but...sometimes there's no time like the present." That was one of my favorite lines.

And when Mr. Todd kissed Mrs. Lovett's forehead and...wow, I just loved the whole fic.

This truly is an amazing piece of art. I've read interpretations of this scene quite a few times, but none do it as skillfully as this. The whole flow of the piece is exceptional, the imagery you create is simply beautiful, and your word choices are enough to leave my heart aching for the two of them. I loved the way you put that Todd was Lovett's Lucy. A truer statement has never been said, in my opinion. Wonderful work. :)

Aah, this is a great interpretation of what should've happened :D

I really do not feel any compassion towards Lucy, to be honest. Oh, it's sad for her ofc, but I feel Sweeney and our dear mrs Lovett just belong together. I loved how you captured the scene and the feelings, well done!

Lots of love,

Xx CaptainSparrow-luv

Excellent! I really enjoyed this.

wow, never thought of it going like that before..they really should have done it like this in the movie, it's much better, even if he doesn't love her! And bloody Anthony, I really wanted to smack him when he interrupted them! lol but still, lovely story! :D

That was the best romantic fic I've read in a while. Nine out of ten times in this type of fic, Sweeney starts it and won't shut up. You kept everybody in character the whole time. This story could easily be inserted into the movie. Kudos!

"...some strange emotion that he believes is called pity..." Oh bravo.

If I had to pick one word for this piece it would be powerful, because that's what it is, plain and simple. I wish you could hear me applauding frantically. Cause I am.

this was really good i was going to write something in the same scene but i decided not to for i shouldn't have anything to write about. your story fixed it all quite perfectly and you proved that i do in fact have something to write about but i shall not try to write for i know i can't match this perfect story!

I Absolutely Loved It,

MissDepp4eva

wow! that was amazing to read! ...i usually TRY to leave some sort of decipherable reveiws...but this has knocked all sense out of me. incredible!

this is fantastic. it's amazing how you manage to have parts that are so tender and sweet, and yet totally in character. the whole thing is beautifully written, as well. instant fave.

Amazing! Perfect! *_* I hope you'll write more of these!