This is really interesting. Please continue?

Yes! Post-DragonSort of DuskumaSuspenseEpic PlotAWESOME.
If it hadn't been years since the last update, I would really be looking forward to the next chapter.

Well obviously this mysterious person is me!
And what is this about you not updating since 2011?! Quitting without warning? Tsk tsk. I do wish you'd continue though. You had their voices down in a way most people do not. Although I think your Kumators needs a downer. She's a little TOO energetic. Other then that, very good.

awesome story

Is the strange friend Salsa? That's my guess. Didn't seem brainy enough to be Dr. Andonuts. Anyways, great story ya got going on here! I'll be waiting for more!

Hmm... mysterious person is the player, right? I even love how you remembered the doorknowb- I'm guessing you're going with the 'doorknobhappiness' theory.

Yeah... Lucas IS acting like Porky, which is never a good thing. Is it possible BION is Lucas though?

This is a very good fanfic! I love it!

I hope it gets updated soon! I really wanna know what happens next, I hate being kept in suspense!

Keep up the great work!

Azura

the strange friend is probably lucas :D

I seriously did a face palm when Bion ended up being the doctor XDDD. I was just like, LOLWUT? XD I should've realized that Hinawa was the queen they were talking about. Really should've...but I'm rather slow sometimes, haha. Anyways, Nice chapter.

So they're in Lucas' mind...how does that work? I mean, they were randomly in the woods then somehow got into the vincintiy of Lucas' mind? Unless the whole world is Lucas' mind...Gah, I'm making my self confused now. haha. Anyway, maybe you'll explain it in the future, maybe not. It's whatever.

Can't wait to read more~

Inumaru12

Cool, you updated! :) I think you said in the pm, but I can't remember; how many chapters are there? But yay! Lucas is mentioned and will hopefully show up soon. :) Is there gonna be a chapter from Lucas (or Flint's) pov at all? That would be interesting I think.

Bion...Bein..Bein' friends...is that just a coincidence or did you plan it like that? lol. Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

Inumaru12

This is a pretty cool idea. I'd love to read more (though this looks like it haven't been updated in a while) But anyway, cool idea though. Would've love to see what had happen to Flint and Lucas.

Inumaru12

aw, man! I am really looking foward to see Lucas in there! But why, oh why, wouldn't he want to be found I wonder? By sheer sadness? It is so depressing for him, so it could be just it...

And this story is good right now!

And the characters really are in their own personalities! daring, wild, demonic Kumatora...

sleepy Duster...

and...Fuel.

I hope Lucas will be characterized as well as them!

I never thought Boney was an old dog though.

He was like, two at the start, making him five after the three year gap. And then the small gap in the making of New Tazmily, probably about 3 years, making him eight. Dogs live up to 16 years, so I don't think he would be so old. I WAS kinda disappointed when I learned that Rope Snake (SNAKE ROPE!)would replace him.

From someone who can give decent critique on the fictions now cropping up in this small section of Fanfic net, I expect no less than decent writing, and a captivating story.

You deliver nicely, too. :)

The story you're weaving is inspiring, tending to musings of why the World can be so easily recreated, even if we never really saw what it became in the end. The way the land began to build itself back up, and how the loss of two people, their fates unknown, can both have no effect on the town, but at the same time still stabs in their hearts, as felt in how they wait to see what their former travelling mates do.

I'm interested in seeing this continue. Its really nice to see decent stories do still exist in this section, ones that aren't just one-shots these days (I don't care for ones that look like they've been inspired by 4chan and a youtube video). Wonderful stuff.

I think the only thing I can really say against this story is how quickly the days seem to rush through. It seemed like in one paragraph we went from day 3 to day 9. There seems to be a lot of passing time, something that doesn't often get introduced to the games so much. This could both be a bad move, or a unique insight to how the games really move, but perhaps the transitions could be either less obvious or not dated? So rather than going from day 10 to day 12, it could be more 'days passed' or something maybe? Just a thought.

Wow, really good. Your writing is very descriptive and paints a nice mental picture. With shimmery pastel colors. Also, everyone's characterized very well; especially Duster, since he doesn't get much in the way of dialogue and character definition in the game.

I typically try to critique a bit in each review, but at the moment I'm sort of coming up short. Sorry!