| Reviews for Unhappily Ever After |
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feed-fat-tommy chapter 1 . 6/13/2018 Your writing is very humorous and cute. I love it :) |
midnightjen chapter 6 . 4/1/2017 God, I'd forgotten how much I loved this story! |
angelaroberts202 chapter 18 . 3/22/2017 Am I the only one who feels that Casey and Derek are extremely immature in this fanfic? Like, there's barely been any progress in their relationship and its not very realistic that 2 adults are acting like this when they've already kissed anyway |
jabc4 chapter 20 . 2/12/2017 This was SOOOOOO GOOD! That plot development was incredible. I'm thoroughly impressed. Great work. |
Pentastic chapter 20 . 8/30/2016 very cute story. i particularly love the ending |
Requiem17 chapter 20 . 8/21/2016 Beautifully realistic. Thought you were going to going to end it on a realistic note, but then there were two more scenes and you gave us a happy ending. Can't thank you enough for it, make me grin. And honestly, I've laughed aloud quite a few times reading this as well. Really, just masterful job. |
kmesa921 chapter 20 . 4/10/2016 Ahh I love this well written and pretty in character like how often am I going to find this? And you actually got me to care about and genuinely like the other side characters. By the way you definitely handled Mr Tremblays death right like it didn't feel inconsequential it clearly mattered and had an impact. I loved how Casey fixed Derek and then he fixed her those were probably my favorite parts and it just felt so completely right to me. Overall just really great. |
stefaniegk chapter 20 . 11/16/2015 A really good Life With Derek story makes me laugh. This one was amazing. I was sad, I was happy, I was impatient. It was wonderful. Thank you. |
kidcrooner chapter 20 . 10/11/2015 Amazing amazing amazing! I love the journey i went through reading this story. I needed to see it, and im so glad i stumbled upon it! Thanks for writing! Youre so good at it |
Guest chapter 20 . 9/7/2015 Bueno a pesar de la forma caotica, loca extraña y muy iu de ser de esta histria me encanto |
Aeris Aimara Ciren chapter 13 . 6/8/2015 LMFAO at the rate they're going Edwind never going to be able to eat |
Athereal chapter 20 . 4/12/2015 You are a genius and a master of the highest order. Seriously. That last line absolutely kills me every single time. |
Athereal chapter 16 . 4/12/2015 Once again... THAT'S MY BOY! Derek's stubbornness will save the world someday. (And yes, I remember the whole Percy debacle excuse, but, my inner Dasey shipper refuses to buy it.) Also, something I forgot to mention/ask in the last review; Why can't you just let Christian and Marla be happy together?! WHY THE ANGST? SOMEONE DESERVES TO BE HAPPY IN THIS DAMN FIC. |
Athereal chapter 15 . 4/12/2015 THAT'S MY BOY! FOUR FOR YPU GLEN COCO! ...I realize that that was probably an inappropriate/ingracious response to that emotional shitstorm of a chapter, but it was either a boisterous Mean Girls reference, or me berating you on the fact that you just made me cry. OVER AN OC. Like, you've made me cry a bunch of times before (that horrible, awful, cheese-grater-over-my-tender-underbelly section of "Different For Girls" comes to mind) but you just made me cry over an OC. I DON'T CRY OVER OCS. EVER. AND I'M CRYING. So I'm just gonna go ahead and smash the 'IGNORE!' button for most of that chapter, and focus on Derek, being so heartbreakingly, stomachachingly, perfect. He painted her walls. He's reading books. HE'S HOLDING HER AS SHE CRIES. (These are the only things making up for that horrible, pain filled monstrosity of a chapter.) And just as an aside, please understand that I love your fics. All of them. You're the awesomest ever. So even when I'm ranting at you, know that I love you. Unabashedly. |
Athereal chapter 14 . 4/11/2015 The progression of this chapter is literally this: Happy-Happy-HappyHilarious-HappyBirds-DyingLaughing-GutWrenchingPain So I just had to eat an entire order of KFC potatoes in order to recover from how unexpectedly painful this chapter was. WHY DO YOU LOVE TO MAKE ME SO SAD!? |