Please update.

I really like this. It is exactly what I would consider Gisborne to be like (Plus he is H.O.T).

Also it is well written in my opinion anyway. I hope you write more soon cause I would like to see where this is going.

x-x Leobreaker x-x

its good :)

whised there was more chapters thoe XD... keep it up

wow that was...erm interesting to say the least :p

i hope you do another chapter :D

haha i think we all have sick minds

can you please add more chapters this story is the best M rated fanfic i have read

whilst this is definatly a dark fanfic, it's very good. great character, Matilda, and portraying the sheriff and guy. can't wait for more :)

This is very, very nice. Guy is definitely on the scary hottie list, and he was definitely scary in this chapter. But of course, now you have to write the chapter in which Matilda shows the Sheriff her skill. Poor thing.

Thank you! *hugs the computer monitor, as you are not here and thus not huggable* This chapter is greatly, greatly appreciated!

*blinks and fans herself* woah...that was HOT! you have to update soon...blimey.

great story!

w00t! you should keep going- this is amazing.

I'm sure I'd have something interesting and witty to say about this story, were I not rendered incoherent by it. O_O

Holy (or, perhaps, UN-Holy) Wow, that was hot. I really, really, desperately want another chapter. Pretty please? With sugar on top?

This is very good, albeit dark, but I like that!

PLEASE CONTINUE!

ali x

I would love to give a full critique but it's much too hot for me to concentrate. I may have to read it again...and again. Did you know the Sheriff has a blog at the BBC America site?

*Whines*

I think I might have to go read something really fluffy now...but that was fantastically well written! it makes your stomach churn though...seriously. I was sitting at my dest shuddering...but that was extremely well written.

~Paula~

well aren't they nice?...not. really well written

chanel xx