Poor Skyfire man... It was pretty good though! :-) Well done.

Very nice :)

This was a great story :)

Really enjoyed this little story. Wonderfully written.

Damn, that was good.

Beautifully written, well in character and the circumstance was great. I could visualize it all perfectly and I found the lack of communication between Starscream and Skyfire to be rather realistic, despite what was happening.

Great job, I really liked this.

Amazing story, beautifully narrated, captured me from the very beginning.

Let me tell you, portraying that way Starscream’s thoughts without even grazing his mind, it’s something not everybody can do.

Keeping the point of view on Skyfire was a very wise choice. This story couldn’t have been written better. You realize you have a fan, don’t you? ;o)

okay, so starscream actually helped skyfire...aww, he still loves him X3