I like this story. It's different, maybe too much for my head right now, but it's something I haven't read before. It's the first time I read so much "pain and angst" but, somehow, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of the story, so please update soon? I'll see your other works too and favorite you, btw :3

so excited to see how this turns out! great story you got going, they have a great dynamic.

this is by far one of my favorite kingdom hearts stories and love the dynamic you have with hayner and seifer. I read this story when you were just starting to write it and just went back and reread it. I know you probably wont continue the story but i truly hope you will consider it.

This is breaking my heart. Please continue I love it and need to know what happens to both cuties

OMG! You got another chapter up! YAY! :D

I love this story. It's epically awesome. I so wish I could write Seifer and Hayner like this. *sighs* I never seem to get their characters right. .

Can't wait for the next one! :)

Heeey, amaaazing story, buuuut I do want to say I HATE YOUR HAYNER SOOO MUCH! lol like after everything he said i'd just be like "uurgh I hate you" he's so icky. I don't know, I love seifer too much. Also... I'm just asking since you haven't updated in nearly 2 years... Are you dead? Cause if you are i'll totally understand lol I mean, rest in pease and all that, but seriously, do something, discontinue the story whatever i'd at least like to know what happens in the end. XDDD much love, good luck, hope you're still alive!

I'm loving this story so far but is it still in progress? I'm enjoying it too much to have it be over! .

I. LOVE. this. story.

Seriously.

For the past three or four chapters I've just been crying like an idiot... :P I don't know; I became very emotionally attached...

I'm sorry the review sounded rude. Looking back, I can see how that might have been taken wrongly. That wasn't my intention.

I am VERY frustrated right now because I have lists of stories in my favorites (yours is one of them) and they have not been updated for months.

I personally feel that if someone wants to post a story, they should finish it, because we the readers get SO attached to the story that you have created. If you don't plan on finishing it, we need to know, so we don't re-read the story seven or eight (… or like 20) times waiting for the next chapter. Some of my favorite stories haven't been updated in over a year, and I have no power to make the author finish their work. All I can do is send a review. And it frustrates me.

I really do love your story. But you left off at a point where you've only given a small peak into the deeper plot. It's torturous for me to see your story in my list when I know exactly where it ends, and what I'm waiting to find out.

It is very good, and I want you to finish it.

Please.

just fucking end the story. just end it.

Oh my gosh, I cried... It felt good I haven't cried in a while... blah... I feel drained, but not Hayner drained just, blah. I've read one manga, which name eludes me, with a mother having post pardum, or however you spell it. Man... tough shit... You're writing is powerful stuff dude... Keep writing.

Sincerly,

Shadow

Ow, ow, ow... Something in my eye... Anyways I just had to comment on everything! This story is amazing! It's so important it must have 3 exclamation points! Have you watched the anime Wolf's Rain? A character in it says "this one" a lot. Anyway I'm going to read the rest of this now at 11:40 at night! Yay for night-meds... and candy! XD

Hi! I only just picked up this story (read completely through it in one sitting) and so far, the plot has been interesting as well as the individual relationships you've created between your characters. I'm not sure how much of a critique you want, but if I may point out I feel as if you're starting to drag the whole "Hayner denial" aspect of the story out a little too long. While I assume there is some plot reasoning for this, the same argument has been presented several times over by now, and I haven't seen any evidence of major progression in Hayner's rationale of his relationship with Seifer.

Maybe moving them onward, or exploring another factor of why their relationship will end up where it's suppose to be, might help the flow of your plot run more smoothly.

great story, cant wait 4 update tho its been almost a year

Oh. My. God. This is the most awesome thing since ever. I ~love~ the angsty-ness... I feel like Gir with waffles. Congrats on fabulosity!