Oh god, I absolutely LOVE the way you write Ryōhei. I'm attempting to write a crack 805933 fic and I needed his muse and came across your fics. They're hilarious to the extreme.

this story is totally my type

omg... I think I'm going to die of laughter! The entire seen with Hibari was just perfect XDD! -dies-

Anyway, you are correct. That is the only way to write a 3359 fic!

Gyah! Their so unbearably cute TO THE EXTREEM! w

I mean, I guess anyone with Ryohei would be cute in some way or another, because he's just an idiot- such a goddamn loveable idiot... but paired with Gokudera it's so effin' amusing to the extreem! xD

Thank you for writing this by the way~ I've noticed that this pairing isn't very popular (which makes me super sad 'cause I adore it to no end) so I'm happy to even get a couple stories. x3

Shit you wrote this in '08 but it's still awesome! I just read the first and second chapter thought God whoever wrote this has the best I loved your formula for writing a Ryohei and Gokudera fic! FAVED! THANKS!QQ

BEST THING EVER.

FAVORITE LINE: "HOW DO YOU BECOME ASEXUAL?"

BUT ALL OF IT WAS AMAZING. AND RYOHEI CALLING GOKUDERA A WHORE, HAH.

1st chpter was HILARIOUS, seriously..."hOW DO YOU BECOME ASEXUAL!" lol

Before I begin, I'm going to apologise because this will not be a short review. Please forgive all the blathering that's gonna occur because I just can't get over this fic!

MY first thought as I read through? OMIGOD, somebody has the courage to write a 3359 and it's PURE win!

My favourite parts?

"Oh, well, if you're in love, onii-san, maybe you should tell him how you feel—"

"OKAYNEVERMINDHAHAHAI'LLSEEYOULATERKYOKO."

Ryohei lunges, half-deranged and grasps on the front of Hibari's Armani, with a crazed, homicidal look in his eyes. "YOU GOTTA LET ME IN ON THE SECRET." "What secret—" "HOW DO YOU BECOME ASEXUAL?"

(*laughs again; and is now grinning like a maniac) You wrote killer lines for Ryohei's responses. Yamamoto's and Gokudera's as well!

Being silly is ABSOLUTELY canon! (to the extreme!) But you've shown that you can also execute scenes of other emotions very well. The part where Ryohei sobbed and threw rocks; thinking his love life was doomed was actually very awww-inducing because it was sad; sad the way only the angst of a fluffy but IC romance can be sad.

And...

"WHERE THE FUCK ARE MY ROSES, LAWNHEAD?"

(*laughs) An immortal one-liner and the very epitome of 3359's love.

Last (and most), Ryohei's method of courting Gokudera was creative but doesn't lose the timeless charm of old-school romance too. (dawww~ *reduced to a hopeless sap) It befits the passion he characterises.

And squeee! Chapter 2! Ending their POVs with the same conclusion was a nice touch, it was laughs and rueful smiles (love Ryohei's name for Hayato) all the way again until their small gestures wrapped their POVs up by speaking all the things they never managed to say with words. Emotional equivalent of a solid punch indeed.

Did I mention your lack of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes was another plus point?

I'm working on a 3359 fanart myself; because this pairing really needs more love. In the meantime, please write more for them, fellow fangirl! (sends virtual hug) But no pressure; take your time...I'm content to wait to see another piece of your talent. X)

Aw~!

D'aw! *flails* SO INCREDIBLY CUTE (Even though this duo are like having a 12 tonne truck run into you :D) I quite like this pairing, though there isn't a huge amount of it... *pouts* Love 3

This fic is the most amazing thing ever TO THE EXTREME!

Srsly. Chapter one made me crack up (internally, of course, it wouldn't do to imitate Ryohei's public outbursts) and then you go and kill me with cavity-inducing sweetness in the second chapter. HOW'D YOU GET SO FABULOUS, YOU? XD

Way to go! Keep it up WITH YOUR DYING WILL!

It also helps to keep them in character, which is basically what you did

This had me laughing and swooning everytime I reread this fic.

I JIZZED IN MY PANTS IN LAUGHTER.

... That was so sweet. ; w;

And again, I'm giggling at Ryohei. OTL You portray him amazingly. You do both of them, really.

Amazing! 3