you spelt jinchuriki wrong

i loved the fanfic

You should've gone with something like granite. limestone is actually one of the softer types of rock. It practically crumbles under the slightest pressure. Same with shale.

Atrocious english, and fucking OOC. You can't even write the personage.

I've been looking for this all night- its now 7:37 in the morning!

GREAT! Keep up the good work and have a good one!

Well thanks for disappointing me. The multiple personalities was all I was here for. The clones were really starting to annoy me. I'm not reading your rewrite.

Ultra instinct? Lol

I was thinking it was a generic Badass!Naruto up to this point, but Trojan Bunny earned you a Favorite.

hahahahahahahahaha!

Very good story, I hope it continues, greetings, see you, bye!

Coconuts would spoil by the time they made it to not-France, though. Migratory or not, the journey required would never work, even with the required weight capacity.

Honestly Naruto’s thoughts actually mirror mine at any given moment and that kinda scares me. To a lesser degree, but the slightly eclectic random thought connected to a strange emotion that I’m seeing is something I get, like every once and a while I’ll get a burst of aimless piety. I’m entirely atheist/pastafarian, meaning that I basically worship satire and all gods are just big jokes. (Don’t go hating on all pastafarians, I’m a particularly weird one.) So, what I do is write bizzarre texts to my friend praising stuff like Jimi Hendrix’s left pinky, or the smell of the NYC port authority.

That, my friend, was some damn poetry from a perspective of a cat getting chased by a group of doppelgangers. And damn did it made me cry.

It would’ve been way better if you just made that kunai-clone still be a kunai but with Naruto’s face on it lmao