Was COMPLETELY deceived by this story's title. I'm sorry, but I was expecting something completely different to what you have written here.

Cute but also very horrible. I don't agree with their actions in the end. Not one bit. Still like the one shoe though. Nice display of chemistry and tension in such small amount of words.

Please make more Harry ships . You have made beautiful one shots_

This is really fabulous. Bravo.

Loved it. Short, bitter and so very delicious. Didn't see any grammar errors I could point out to, so no worries about the lack of beta. Can see why you'd win them awards back in the day.

I really love the idea of Hermione wanting to sleep next to Harry to feel safe and reassured and what it says about the underlying dynamic of their relationship.

That was HOT! LOVED it! Need more!

A bit melodramatic but then they are in a very intense moment (again) and finally give in.
Definitely food for the muse, thanks :)
M

That was incredibly Well written! I loved it

Jen,

What an incredibly beautiful and wonderfully written story. THIS is exactly what Harry and Hermione would be like, you described the emotion in both of them beautifully and made the story come alive in my mind.

Thank you so much for writing this superb piece of work and for sharing it with us.

Aby
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Great story

Poor Ron.

cool.

Never forgiving you for ending it like that! :P My favorite one-shot!

Omgod. This was...explosive. You are brilliant!