I just found this story today and I must say I do like what I’m hearing so far. The only thing that I do not like is your pairing because it’s been over done so many times. It would be good if you can do a Naruto/Tintin pairing. In addition Naruto should have a third element besides fire and wind. I think water would be a nice addition to his other two elements mainly because water is fluid and it can be used in combination with both fire and wind.

to bad story was gave up on

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I like it! ADD MORE PLEASE!

So wtf happened to Jiraiya? Also again, Sarutobi should have just kept his mouth SHUT on who contains the beast, let it be known the beast IS contained but the only one who knows by WHOM is the Hokage, "village security" reasons,

WHAT THE UNHOLY FUCK

just awesome

what is with fire and it being normally a "Bad Guy" standard, can't you at least try and not fall into that habit? There are several who use fire as the pinnacle of evil doers, some examples: The Uchiha, Deidara, even Voldemort used Fiendfyre, Harry as a Dark Lord normally has the fire element at his beck and call.

This is just too Awsome! I love this new dark, manipulative Naruto and Hinata isn't bad either. I love this.

~Sage

Wow, this is pretty good, and I hope to see how they rescue Naruto soon! W

to many curses man control the anger in you characters

este fic merece una continuacion pero ya date prisaque muchos de nosotros estamos esperando

please update this is great naruto gets away and tells them to f off

ilove this story i hope the next chapter will be up i mean is naruto going to make his villiage will he become the next demon lord or is he faking that he is unconsious so he can go to the base and finish of the dawn organization.( english for akatski).

that manipulation kinda sounds like Lelouch from Code Geass when he speaks to an audience as Zero

great story caint wait to read the rest.