Well, since chapters can only be reviewed once, I can't review any of the chapters after this one. So I'm reviewing the end of the story here. So, SPOILERS for anyone who hasn't read beyond this point!

Okay. I have finally read this whole story within a decent chunk of time. Instead of, you know, three years. It's been a different experience. I still think that the women were far too sheltered, as I clearly thought back then. But I think that the biggest thing with both this story and the last story is just the distinct lack of Pokemon! It was like you were trying to keep Pokemon out of this story! The only real features I can think of is Pikachu and Ash's friendship back in the base-those flashbacks-May being attacked and then Skye flying her there, Michael's ditto, and then a couple things near the end of this story. But by that point, it just seemed like the characters had been backed into too much of a corner and we needed a loophole. It wouldn't have felt that way if they'd been more included throughout. I almost think that this story would have been better in a world without Pokemon, though, just because it was so close to being that way.

Taylor regaining her sight was really nice and conclusive. But, if she was always blind, it just doesn't make sense to me. It's the best representation of her getting better, but it just isn't believable to me. But, you created her illness, so I guess I can't fault you for creating her wellness.

I remembered the thing about Skye and Alexi hiding out in the tube. I still really like that. It's a good solution, but it's also poignant. And how Alexi and Skye really bring out each other's inner strength-and their instincts-is nice. When Alexi is on the computer and it seems like Skye is totally mistreating her, but he's really just trying to bring our her instinct in protecting the kids. That was subtle and great.

I never realized how few reviews this story and Heart's Disadvantage have. This were just such huge stories for me! They were formative! Plus, Madness has been so well received. Truth be told, these two don't exactly stand the test of time super well, but they're still unique and interesting. The plot was just a little rushed, which you yourself even pointed out. But there's value here for sure. Beyond just nostalgia.

It's funny, though. I loved this story so much that I wanted to write a fanfiction and have Ash and Misty have a girl named Makaila. I couldn't imagine them any other way. Now I don't even like the idea of Ash and Misty having children, haha. That was super weird for me to read now. But, obviously, that was my fault for reading as story in which I knew that happened. I liked Makaila, but I just couldn't imagine her as their child. I loved Drew and May with kids, though. Speaking of them, there was not nearly enough of them in this story! I loved Drake being empowered there at the end, but we needed some good DAML!

My favorite parts of the story were probably the character background building parts. Sarah/Skye, Keagan, Makaila's accident. I also really liked the resulting dynamic between Taylor and Skye's clone. I really liked Skye's clone, save for those psychic abilities. And Skye having them. That was a bit of a cop-out. Wow, turns out that I can't give a compliment without giving a critique.

Okay, I've gone on enough about irrelevant stuff. I'm glad you wrote this story. I'm so glad that you finished it. And now I'm just hoping and praying that you come back and finish Madness! Because that story is incredible!

Wow... Awesome story! The previous one was good too, but this one just topped it all off. Maybe you should do another story to be more around mikaila and her friend. Ciao

A job well done! :) It truly was a great ending to a great series. I loved it from the beginning of the first story till the ending of the second one. You have certainly come a long way from then, and you are only going to improve my friend, I just know it.

We all know it.

I thought it was interesting how you had it jump from person to person at the beginning. Everyone was roughly in the same area, but you made sure that each person got their due respect, which was a nice touch. I loved the opening with Alexi, something that was quite fitting for the story as a whole. Once again your skills at symbolism shine in this ending, and it really helps make for a good conclusion, to allow people to see how it ends and what it means for the characters in the story. The reasons for making Team Rocket leave them alone now was also spot on. It makes PERFECT sense for that to be, and that's why it's so realistic that this is FINALLY their time of peace.

Another thing I liked is how you downplayed the romances. This story had a lot of them, and while most people would of spent this entire chapter trying to make each couple official, you spent it doing what you needed to do, and I respect that. You made sure that this story, something you worked so hard on, something that truly got you to where you are today, ended right. This is why I know that you are one of the best authors on this site today. You know what it takes to make a story amazing, and you do just that, make it amazing.

While I would not stop you in the least from making one last quick chapter for the kids, (just more amazing things for me to read in my opinion!), I don't think it is necessary. Honestly, the amount of time you spent in this story talking about them was just right. You explained how they are, and where they will probably end up, and it was just the right amount. If anything, you could make your final chapter, (should you do it), like a year later thing, where you explain what the couples/people are doing, etc.

I think the moment with Michael and Taylor was just perfect. The emotion you had in that scene was just terrific. While the scene could of possibly been a bit longer, the detail you put into the scene with the length it was was unbelievable. It felt so real, something that is incredibly hard to do since obviously someone being born blind doesn't usually get their eye sight back. Taylor's reactions, interactions, they were all spot on in my opinion, and I think that that made the chapter all that much better. :)

The ending, my god, what can I say about the ending? It was the PERFECT ending! I won't lie, I thought for a moment you would end it with the boy saying something, but the way you ended it was truly something seen in a masterpiece novel. I LOVED LOVED LOVED it! There was such power with the way Ash reflected back to his Team Rocket days, (once again using your skills at symbolism and characterization), and the fact that it connected to the boy's current emotions made it so...ahh! :D It would be interesting to see how Ash deals with his daughter's sudden new boyfriend living with them. XD

What can I say my friend? You have grown from a young author with a dream and bright ambitions to becoming an author with so much talent and potential. This series has been your "baby" in a sense, and it has finally grown up. I am proud to have been with it since the beginning, and I am glad to see it off now that it's over. So, I thank you prettygirl17, for giving me and everyone else here on this site a wonderful series.

Thank you. :)

sincerely,
evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

He never got a name! This was good. It's been such a long journey; so many years. I can't believe it's over. It's been so long since I read Hearts Disadvantage, I didn't even know that you changed the title! I think that a little end chapter would be good, if you want to write it, though this one felt very... final. On it's own. Well... Congratulations on finishing it. It feels weird, but... I don't know. I... don't know. Nice work, Aleksi.

I'm so sorry that it took me so long to review! I just... Haven't read a lot of fanfiction lately. Moved toward reading actual books. Very strange... Anyway:

1 question. How did they go and save Alexi and Skye if the gas was supposed to be there? I'm very, very confused by that. You had just talked about it, so it couldn't have dissipated or worn off by then. Yeah. Oh, and you also spelled Alexi as Aleksi again.

You were right, this chapter was very conclusive. Brought a lot of this very, very long process all together. Reminded me, quite frankly, of the very obvious fact that Rocket had controlled their life, and it in fact was all over after this. How could I forget that? Now all we need is to find out about the Boy. He's still baffling.

I can't believe that it's almost over, though! This has been such a long journey! I appreciate your commitment and coming back from the hiatus too. It's really a great story, even though I generally don't like OC stories. :)

Wow! Woah, I mean...woah!

So much happened in this chapter! One exciting and strenuous thing to another! It was a roller coaster of a chapter with action, drama, and a little romance thrown at every corner. I could barely contain myself, literally in fact, as I sit here, typing this with trouble over the excitement! (part of this comes from my dog, who decided that typing is over-rated, and is situated right under my arm, but I digress. ;D).

You did such a fantastic job on this chapter, I can hardly believe it! If I didn't know that such work came from you, I wouldn't believe that a chapter like this was even possible. :) THAT'S how good it was!

Now I do apologize if I forget to bring something up in the review, as this chapter was very long and I might miss a thing or two.

I was very interested in seeing how the groups escaped, their thinking processes, what and who they were prioritizing for the escape and what they were to do if people were still stuck inside. Although it seems heartless to some people, the thought of them leaving others inside should the worst happen, it's also VERY realistic and true. People WOULD think about this should the situation arise, and it's the idea of who would be left behind that makes people wonder.

You did add more with the Alexi, (who I keep wanting to spell as Aleksi out of habit), and Skye sibling situation, which worked well for the story, especially towards the end. :) I also LOVED how you had Sarah "help" Skye at the end there, something similar to what I intend to have in "R". (SPOILERS!). While it may have taken away from the "realistic" feeling of the story to some, I think it was a perfect fit. I have a feeling that that WOULD happen, if given the circumstances.

I also liked how you gave more to Taylor in this chapter. You took scenes away from people who had a lot of them, and gave them to others who needed it more. This is a very tough thing to do, as I know from experience. You did a great job of showing the balance and giving people credit where it was due. It also made the Skye/Sarah moments all the more fitting.

I did find it random with the lone grunt who shot Keagan and then ran away, however it did make the scene more understanding with Alexi running away to save the kids. Plus it gave the group a more injured, tattered look. You threw me for a loop with it, I had no idea who, if any, of the "main group" you would kill off. :P

Having the children, well, most of the children, die off made perfect sense, as tragic as it was. It made more sense to the story both in terms of being realistic in the number of people Alexi could save, and the behaviors of Team Rocket, especially given the situation. I am curious as to what will happen to the kids, now that they are saved, (for the most part).

There were a couple errors in the chapter, however, the only one that was really noticeable was that occasionally you would state that there were 5 kids, and then 4, and then 5 again. I wasn't sure which was which until the end. Otherwise, no real errors to state, great job!

I also noticed that you had Alexi and Keagan kiss! :D Woohoo! Just like your little Twitter post said. XD I know that you're not used to writing romances in that way, but I won't lie, it's fitting that you write it that way. Not all romances NEED that special kiss, some don't need one at all. However, this one was more than fitting. I couldn't help but go "Awww!", after seeing it. And I wonder where it will go from there. So many romances, so little time. ;)

Now I am more curious as ever! Will Brock, Eitan, and Keagan get out of this scott free? What will happen to the kids? Will Makaila and the boy get together? What happened to the other Rocket heads like Mark? Will Ash and the gang be TRULY safe? ARGH! CLIFF HANGERS MAJOR! XD

The Pokemon personalities were something else that I thought were a nice touch. While some people would see it as thrown in, (people often find that Pokemon shouldn't show their personalities, why I don't know), I felt that it was a deserving, and realistic, touch. Pokemon are characters too, really they're a cross between animals and people (in terms of mental capabilities). All the Pokemon acted in a realistic and awe-inspiring way that leads people to believe that these Pokemon are characters too, not just pets or tools.

I have a feeling that I am missing a lot for this review, but unfortunately I am having a tough time summarizing the amount of awesome this chapter made. And I know that you are short in time, so I won't take it away from you. :) An amazing chapter overall, and I cannot wait for the next one!

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml

P.S.- YOU'RE SICK! :O I'M SORRY! :( I do hope that you feel better soon my dear! Be sure to get plenty of sleep and drink lots of fluids! I would never suggest skipping a class or two to help your overall health, but I do suggest that your overall health should take priority. Best wishes! 3

-EVAN AAML

Wow. Long chapter! Okay, a little confusing, but I'm sure that you'll wrap some of that up. I just wish that you would go into more detail in some parts, instead of assuming that I know what you're talking about! Anyway, I don't think that Makaila would react quite so well to witnessing two murders, even if she is very strong and has been through a lot; she's only a 13 year old girl. Regardless, I'm glad that Eitan came around, he never really seemed like he was all bad. Grant, on the otherhand... It would have made more sense for Mark to be the one with the huge vendetta, but I guess you still want him in the story, so Grant was a good guinea pig for revenge, I suppose.

The stuff with Drake was confusing again. Did he shoot the grunts and kill them, or did he shoot them with something else? And does the code have anything to do with the numbers that he was talking about before? Or did he get the code from watching the other grunt punch them in? Because no matter how good you are with numbers, I don't think that you could memorize that that way when you're busy shooting people. Okay, I'm being critical again, but I'm just being a constructive criticism giver! Oh, and did Eitan have the Instinct for Mikaila, or something? It's just that the last sentence didn't make much sense. Anyway, this was a really good chapter, and really, most of it made sense. I love this story, and I can't believe it's almost over! Can't wait for the next chapter!

A great way to end a great chapter! :D Sorry for the delay in review, I hadn't checked my e-mail for a day or two now. YOU, my dear, NEED to get some sleep! :O You shouldn't be up so late! As much as I appreciate the meaning of sending this chapter out, if you have school and work then by all means do them first! Get your sleep so that you're well rested and ready for your busy day my dear! I do hope that school ends soon for you, so that you have more time to relax!

I was able to picture the entire chapter in my head, like a t.v. episode or movie, it was PERFECTLY described in a way that made it visual and easy to understand. I could easily see this story as a mini series of Pokemon. The attention to detail is utterly amazing! Of course, you already know this, since I tell you over and over again how good you are at this. BUT I CAN'T HELP IT! :D IT'S SO TRUE! XD

I loved the way you had a lot of these events happen at the same time. It felt much more realistic, while at the same time having things go along at a timely fashion. Most people tend to write things sequentially, which is all fine and good, but it tends to make things seem prolonged. I myself use the sequential method mostly due to the fact that I feel that I can't write things well in a simultaneous style. You have written in this style very well, and it shows in how good this chapter was.

I also liked the way you wrote the emotions of the characters. It was all very well written and it was perfect for the moments that the characters were going through. People can often over or under exaggerate emotions for dramatic stories. Comedies are easy because they are to be taken light hearted, (which btw you did a great job at the comedy between Ash and Makaila, I laughed out loud and woke up my dog. XD), but when it comes to drama it needs to be taken seriously. Too often there isn't enough emotion for what scenes are occurring. Likewise, there are writer's who go well over the top, wanting it to be too dramatic. You had a terrific balance in the way the characters reacted to people or events. It was realistic, and more importantly, believable.

The scene with the orb reacting to the crack seemed so perfect, this was the scene that I most felt was described like a t.v. or movie scene, and it was AMAZING! The emotion was what made the scene even better, seeing the Rocket's reactions and the way they tried to stop it, along with Alexi's little note on the computer. It was too perfect. :)

Drake's scene was also very good. It finally got to where Drake was able to show that he can do something, while at the same time showing to his parents that he is capable of handling himself and even protecting others at the same time. His skills at the number pad and the way he knocked out the grunts shows that he did learn from his parents, which is also very important in showing the connection he DOES share with them. It was a very relatable and realistic child to parent situation. A child learns from his parents, uses them in real life, but at the same time does his or her own thing as well. Very good!

I also liked how you had Alexi and Skye's scene. While you did not go into a lot of detail for it in this chapter, you showed some great drama and character development, particularly with Skye. It was well written, as I realize that EVERYTHING you do is. ;) However, due to the shortness of the scene, not much more for me to mention.

The ending was amazing! I loved the dramatic showdown, (however brief), with Grant. It was a good thing to have into the story, especially since many people leave the battle for the end and then have it one massive thing. You're spreading it out, allowing each villain their own scenes, which is perfect. This is how I write too with bad guys. Eitan's character development was huge as well, possibly the best in this chapter. To think that he himself had the instinct too, but unlike the boy, was a Rocket grunt who worked for them and followed their instructions, it shows GREAT development while showing his anguish and split decisions. He went against his instinct in so many ways to follow his orders, but at the same time became protective of Makaila, it shows almost a split personality as he tried to cope with the two thoughts. His ending was tragic, but very well written and perfect for the story. It shows conflict, while also giving his character more character. People LOVE that.

I am wondering what is going on with the other characters, such as Keagan, Brock, Michael, etc. It will be interesting to see what they will do and how they will affect their escape/plans.

I did see a few mistakes here and there in the chapter, nothing major, but given the time you posted this I'm surprised you didn't have more! GET SOME SLEEP PRETTYGIRL! (had to make sure you got that. You know I worry about you! ;)).

Overall, this was, to no surprise what so ever, a BRILLIANT AND WONDERFULLY WRITTEN CHAPTER! I can't wait for the next update, (actually I can, because I know you're busy, and you NEED YOUR REST!). It was well written, had TERRIFIC detail and characterization, and kept me in suspense/laughter the entire time. A top notch job my friend. :)

Until next time! Hope everything is going well! :)

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

Sorry it took me so long to finish reading it/review!

This was good without editing, but it sounds as though you're in need of a beta. :) Anyway, I had completely forgotten that Alexi and Skye were related! Goodness, it's like being shocked all over again! And boy, that Instinct is potent. And that poor, poor grunt. He probably wishes he were passed out. And Mark was a test subject? Nice twist there! I wonder what Eitan thinks of potentially killing Makaila... Interesting reaction. The one part that I didn't get was when Skye pulls Alexi out of the room and tells Gary that if they aren't back in 5 minutes to do it himself. Do what himself? I don't know, that little thing... I just felt like I was missing something. Oh, and I loved the Drake psychoanalysis. Very fun; I enjoy stuff like that. And his thing with numbers... I wonder what you're going to do with that too. You're good at making the story not super predictable. Which is awesome.

Hm, well that was a rambling, disconnected review. Hope you enjoyed! :D

Sheez, I go from one INCREDIBLE chapter, to yet another INCREDIBLE chapter! Not gonna lie, I'm getting a little bit jealous here! ;P Your writing skills are just...WOW!

The interactions with Ash and the Rockets, it's something of a wonder really. There's so much psychology in this section, honestly you should consider psychology as a major! It fits perfectly with the story and Ash's plan all at the same time. Seeing the jealousy and anger of the Rockets, the so called "trained" Rockets. In a way this humanizes them, something somewhat ironic since Rockets aren't considered human. It's a VERY interesting stance to take on the characters, and it makes the story all that more interesting. Ash is playing them like cards, and while there are some things he's not guessing, (Mark being a test subject shocked me), he rolls with what he has and it works. Psychology always interested me, as did Philosophy, two things I find go hand in hand, but that's a different discussion all together. And the way you wrote the psychology really fits well in this! :D

I loved Makaila and the boy's scene, it was romantic but not overly so where it drowned out the drama and intensity of the scene, (something I admit I do a bit too often, I make it TOO romantic in the dramatic scenes). You did a good amount of it. I also liked how you made Makaila's understanding of the Rocket's accidental death, showing her innocent and naive side of her personality. She was not brought up into this kind of life, and so she has some split personalities in a way, with her innocent "I can't believe this is happening" phase and her "this is war, it happens" phase. A VERY good touch!

Once again Drake's scene also stuck out to me. While it was not the same as the last chapter, it did have a GREAT sense of interest and possibly foreshadow, (good foreshadow with the grunt Makaila held hostage btw! ;D). I like how you had his character debate over himself with what he wanted to do, and why he had trouble making decisions for himself. Once again we go back to how kids his age really are, and this is a great thing to add in. Kids ARE like this. They want rebellion and freedom, but once they get it, they're confused, not sure of what they want because they always did what their parents wanted. Good job! :)

I am curious as to what will happen with Brock, and I do have some concern over it. Hopefully he will be alright! I also liked the ending with the brother/sister debate. I had almost forgotten about that revelation, and I am wondering when it will come into play for them. :)

Once again, your story telling and characterization mixed with the perfect words and symbolism astound me. You are quite the author, and one who should be very proud of her work. I certainly know that I am proud of you, and honestly flattered to be friends with one of your skill! :D

I might be forgetting something here...but I'm afraid I can't seem to think of it at the moment...OH WAIT! Yes, it was about the last chapter. With Drew's concern for his family and his priorities. I loved that touch. A very logical and real debate that someone would have, certainly me if I were in that situation. Family first, despite the importance of everyone's well being.

Hmm...trying to think...yeah, I forget now. Well I HOPE I'm not forgetting to comment on something important, especially since you deserve A LOT of credit for this writing. :)

I feel bad now since I gave you four messages to respond to! :O My apologies! But I'll talk to you soon I guess!

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml

P.S.- I'm currently working on Evan and Aleksi's Pokemon battle. Not gonna lie, I'm pretty psyched for it. ;) If I need anything I'll be sure to ask.

-EVAN AAML

My goodness, I didn't realize you had two chapters up! I must of forgotten about the previous chapter update message, my apologies!

7000 words huh? Sounds like a chapter of "R". XD I keep mine between 6000-7000 usually. It can be tiring after awhile. But you did a great job of spacing it out evenly, making sure it wasn't all extreme detail or pointless drabble.

I LOVE the elements you put into this chapter. There was so much to cover that I'm afraid I might forget some of it in this review! :O

Ash's intent on getting the mission to work was well written and fitting for his character. You made your own interpretation of Ash for this story and it is a very interesting psyche at that. Like we discussed earlier, people experience Team Rocket cruelty differently. And in Ash's case, he learned a lot from his terrible experiences. He did what was best for the mission, and while it may not have been the BEST choice, it was one that people could argue was the right one. I liked how you made Makaila understand that it wasn't her father's fault that he couldn't help, it showed maturity while also some "like father like daughter" cases as well. :)

I also loved how you had Drake's little bit. Someone his age WOULD have that kind of personality, rebellion and a desire to fight. It fist perfectly with him, especially given his rather conservative parents. It's a very typical family, minus the Team Rocket sense of course. Having Taylor talk to him about this was important for him as well, since he was a bit minor in this story. This was important character development that he needed.

I have to say though that the best part in this chapter for me was the debate over destroying the files. It was the PERFECT drama needed in this story! It's EXTREMELY difficult to make that kind of decision, especially knowing what destroying it or keeping it would do. The justifications all fit perfectly, and the characters having torn decisions over it all was just the right touch. I was utterly amazed at how well this was written. Once again you show your true strength in writing, a skill unmatched by anyone. :)

There were some good funny moments in this story as well, which I felt were important to have. Especially with May and Drew, a typical husband/wife debate. The moments were big enough to give people notice and laugh, (which I did multiple times), but small enough to not distract the readers from the story at hand, a perfect blend. It was well done in the sense that it allowed us to understand the situations more and make them seem more realistic.

The four sentences at the end were a very interesting thing to add to the end of the chapter. Unique in the sense that not a lot of people do that, and yet it seemed so perfect as well. Especially given that you were purposely telling the story through different "vantage points". Something I do very frequently and understand how hard it is. That was very well thought of!

AHHHH! YOU DID A NARRATION LIKE ME! XD It's cool isn't it! :D I haven't done it in awhile now that I think about it, have to get back on track!

Overall, an amazing chapter! I'll get right onto the next one then! ;)

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

Just finished the most recent chapter \(-)/ I like it of course and I can't believe that u r continuing it still after all these years! I am no critic tho :( sorry I am totally optimistic :)

I read through the prequil pretty fast. I just couldn't put it down! I am now on chapter 9 and I'm still reading! I just wanted to review and say its awesome! Even tho ur almost done :(

A few revision errors. I read your entry for this, not the second upload, so I don't know if you fixed them, but it's straight, not strait, and you put thought instead of through.

Anywho, this was quite an enjoyable chapter. Why must Mark mess with the plan? Ugh, he shouldn't kill the boy too... It's a double whammy! I can totally see Makaila screaming super loud right then; that was good. I also have no ideda where Ash is going with his conversation. Hope it works, though. Brock would have been good Misty's group, because he's kind of useless to Alexi's group. Misty's group handled themselves eventually, though. What happened to the beeping explosive? They couldn't have just left it there, because it would have exploded the explosion room... Which kinda would have sucked. Oh, and as much as I think it's good that Drake is trying to do his own thing... Kind of terrible timing. He has no idea where he's going, and I don't even think that he has any pokemon to defend himself. Or does he? Ah well, looking forward to maybe another speedy update?

Your last chapter was NOT terrible! :P You shouldn't bring yourself down like that, you are far too good of an author for that. ;)

As for this chapter, you DEFINITELY showed that you got back into the swing of things. The characterization and word choice was PHENOMENAL! (as always, your skills at this are unmatched I must say. Whenever someone asks me about characterization and detail in people, I always refer to you!).

I loved the word choice and descriptions you used for the characters, particularly when Keagan and Gary were thinking or talking. You have an amazing talent for diving into a person's psyche and bringing forth a personality and character that people can immediately relate to and understand. (BTW, I was not confused at all about Skye and Michael, you did a great job at explaining it in the previous chapter).

I didn't realize that it was that that Ash had used in the last chapter. I knew that it would have a bigger role in the story, and I was anticipating it's use in the chapter. I am excited to see how it plays out more in the upcoming chapters. It's a real interesting MacGuffin to use for this story! :)

I will admit, I was a bit confused as to how Ash was in the cell talking to Gary, and then at the end of the chapter, in another room separated from the others. It might of been something I missed, I'm not sure.

The way you detailed the chapter however, it was amazing! I find that I tend to be more technical with my stories, analyzing them and explaining them as they are realistically, (with exceptions of course, "Power From Within" being one). You on the other hand, use symbolism and feelings more for description, something that is A LOT harder to pull off. You show us what the characters are feeling, and use it as a way to describe one's looks or situation. It's remarkable in all honesty. Especially in a story like this, where it's realistic, but also mixed with things so unimaginable. You make it all seem so real and possible. I think that you would be AMAZING at writing a fantasy style story because of it. Your attention to symbolism and characterization really match it perfectly. ;D

Overall, an amazing update! I can't wait for the next one, especially since you're back in the groove. Just be sure to not let it distract you from your real life my dear, we wouldn't want that now would we? ;)

As always, I wish you the best bestie! (I always wanted to say that. XD). Until next time!

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML