Very weird and unrealistic and out of character

harry potter the winney little bitch who lived

I like your story. It moves well from scene to scene with meaning, not just filler fluff. Oded Fehr made those movies work you know.
Looking forward to more.
Thanks,
Ron Pate

ok so for 7 maybe harry , (as harry died in this world , so in memory of him) and a star name idk which caused Sirius means the dog star

congratulations on becoming an aunt

Interesting chapter and plot and amazing chapter

great story...i really enjoyed reading it...

Sumary was cool n attractive

Plot an OK

Humour again an Ok

Ur story/script/writing method

Do u even k when ur story is beginning n endin...wth is goin on in d story do a rewrite & plz do write it being sober nnt drunk outta space

Awesome story... but you should put the complete sign.

So much fun! I'm glad that you wrote it and posted it here for everyone to read.
L

Wow nice ending good story ice ending good story

Yay you and your authors notes

Cool

Nice

Good