Loved it! Fantastic work, thank you.

Good story! Thanks!

Wow! I love how you've written this; it reminds me a lot of the show.

That's one thing I have a problem with for most stories. Usually they don't write it like the shows, and you have. You have kept it true to the show. Which is exactly what a good story needs.

So, good job!

great fic! :D

This is a pretty good fic. Love how they got the bad guy,lol

Really good job!:D

Ok... I've read up to chapter 9 so far and I got to tell you, you keep things interesting while making me wonder what's gonna happen next.

One of the best parts is that you really keep the characters real! Good job!

) happy!finished reading it..so nice...thank you. great writing, tight plot and everyone was delightful!

superb job of eliciting a confession! goren and eames at their best. and a beautiful finish. i really enjoyed your story! thanks for sharing it with us.

good detective work by our heroes. i liked the line "that was why he loved her, he reflected." anyone willing to follow a hunch through grunt work like that is truly loyal. also, nice description of the bar, and rhino came across as very realistic.

Lovely! A real casefile. I am very glad you finished this fic! Seemed a teensy bit quicker pace than the previous chapters, but still satisfying. Neat job to wrap it up. And subtle but believable romance - reminiscent of how it might turn out in canon! Thanks.

aww love the ending!

and well done with the confession

Good ending!

Great story! Kept me hooked the whole time :)

I'm crossing my fingers that they succeed in getting a confession.

I was pleasantly surprised to see this story updated. I had forgotten about it, but I am now reminded how much I like it. Great case file, and the romantic undertones are really nice.