Gahhh my heart!

I'm so sad this is just a oneshot. This idea is incredible. Kudos~!

Loved it! Quite the unique fic. I'm sure I haven't read anything else quite like it as yet. *claps*

Makogoodpower? I don't know why that made me laugh. XD

Sounds like a username.

That was both damn fascinating idea, with a nice undertone of horror too it. Both from background you give of the girl's life but also on the fact that this one of the very few ways that I could actually see Cloud aiding Jenova.

I almost can feel sorry for the scientists if they weren't complete monsters from the sounds of it, given that I don't see Cloud offering much in the way of mercy or kind deaths in this once he gets over his shock.

The girl is excellently written as well too the point that I'm all sad that this is a oneshot.

This is way trippy. But also quite cool. Was the girl in question made with bits of Zack too, and that's why Cloud thought it was him at first? So prettty much she's a combo of Zack and Aerith, with Jenova cells thrown in? In any case, even if I didn't quite understand it all, it was very interesting and well written. XD

Yikes. Creepy child.

This is fascinating, the way in which you've created an even younger sibling for the cracked little Jenova family, and how she doesn't see anything wrong with herself or the way the world is. (Except maybe Zack, but I can understand why she wouldn't like him too much)

The perspective is good, and I love Cloud's reaction to her, first revulsion, then a firm resolve to 'save' her. The only thing I'm confused on is who Old-Her is, likely because I've not played the games at all. I'm guessing either Ifalna or perhaps Lucrecia, or the original Cetra that Jenova corrupted. Bah. Apart from that the whole story is muddled but makes sense in an awesome way, like her view of the world is muddled, but the story makes sense. You are a rocking writer.

Huh. Interesting. Really interesting.

I've read quite a few of the Zack is alive/brought back type ficlets lately, and this has to be one of the more unique ones. It's a wonderful concept. And like the other reviewers, is it meant to be a Oneshot?

If so, it works nicely as one. Gives us just enough to read with interesting tidbits to make it satisfying, but at the same time it seems like such a juicy tender piece of a much larger story.

Either way, kudos! I enjoyed this.

i like this. i think that you should continue it too cause it would be interesting to see what you would do with it. i hope that you will take making this a longer story into consideration. i hope that you do.

Wow. I am... repulsed, and so very much intrigued. I love the concept, love the writing strategies, and especially love the connections. I would love to read more like this!

I adore this beyond reason. The perfect one shot or the beginning of a joyous storyline.

Can I ask one question? What is her name?

This was amazing! I loved it so much, it would be really interesting if you carried on with it and made it into a full lenght story i would definatly read it! Hint hint XD. But anyways i still love it, its really written well and well, i loved it... :D