thank you so much for this story
I was so thinking I want a sequel so glad I found it
happy to read ahead and a wonderful Idea
thanks nintschi

This story was awesome! But we don't know for sure many things and omg HARRY FOR THE LOVE OF MERLIN JUST GET A GRIP!
Here, sorry. Hum..that said, Poor Lucius I want to hug him mais ce n'est pas convenable !

Sorry. Can't finish this. Just isn't for me. The style is good and I like the way you're using the letters. Thanks.

GOOD!
No more Draco.
Hooray for Lucius

In french' it' s 'Droit du Seigneur', instead of 'Droigt'. It may be a mistrake in the spelling. A 'Doigt' (without the 'r' ) means 'finger' in french. :)

It did leave me speechless!

Hell no go harry awesome story

That is the WORST ending! You can't leave us all hanging like that! Killing me! Help!

I enjoy the development of the relationship between Lucius and Harry, and it sets up the sequel really well. I know this is a Lucius/Harry fic and we need to get Draco out of the way in a fashion that's socially acceptable. However, I thought there could be more development to Draco and Blaise. Draco seems like the perfect guy for Harry, sure he's a bit self-absorbed, but aside from Lucius's words, there isn't anything suspicious about him at all. I understand Draco cheating is a necessary plot device, but there doesn't seem to be any support for it. It's a huge shock to the sequel's Draco who didn't seem to have even tried to explain things to Harry and just went off to Greece with Blaise. This Draco is very sympathetic, and the sequel's Draco seems to have completely changed from here. There doesn't seem to be a motivation for Draco wanting to marry Harry; he seems like he should be happy with the current situation.
Also, I'm not sure if this is mentioned in the sequel, that Snape was trying to help Harry by detaining Blaise and Draco. Draco is his godson and Harry is his childhood nemesis's and Lily's son, so it's understandable that he would favor Draco, but I feel like he would have interfered more? Maybe some more subtle things, even in the same vein, to interfere with the wedding.
Regardless, you created relatable characters. Your writing style is impeccable, there are no glaring stylistic errors.

love it

Great fic!

It was really amazing and complex. I just...expected an end... Like, I dont know.. something D:
But I loved it! Amazing!

Please, don't leave me with only this ;_;... It's a great story, though ;-; 3. But I want a continuation! (You know, Harry denying the marriage of Draco and then being with Lucius and maybe marrying him 3 w).

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Did you just pull a 'the lady or the tiger' scenario on me? Shocked, horrified, amazed, I'm really not sure which is the most appropriate.

Well written, and definitely thought provoking.

I thought of signing in, but it seemed that you'd been missing for about a year or so, so I didn't think it worth it. Still, I am Hija del Angel on this site.

OMG that was awesome.