Cute! You wrote Grimmjow very in-character and this made it perfect!

"Take it and cheer the f*uck up!" That single sentence is a masterpiece XD Great story, really enjoyed it :D

Keep writing!

-Warrayfinson

Whoaa. Loved how fluffy yet in character these two were, which is an extremely hard thing to do when you write Grimmjow, with fluff. So that was awsome how you depicted him perfectly. Also loved his humorous outbursts XD. "Unless you're planning on cooking that WITHOUT bean paste, put it down and get me some fucking food."

Awsome job.

I put the translated fiction in this BBS,here's the p/1277900312 Thanks for your a nice day.

Why U no continue? D8

I just knew this was going to be a great story when I read the line "If those things aren’t edible, woman, then get the * back here -now-.” Gotta love Grimmjow XD

“Take it and cheer the fuck up!”

... Okay, that was hilarious.

aw cute. that made me smile:D

Cute fic. It was an enjoyable read. . Good job.

this story was GREAT!

and i loved the ending, it was so cute

i do hope you will write more!

please and thank you!

aw thats so cute!

I would kind of like this to happen in the manga since Grimmjow is so awsome.

I loved it! It was actually in character, good job, and well written. Gotta fav it )

AW!

-Cough.- Temperamental pussycat, always in a huff. Random thought... I wonder if he pukes up blue hairballs from time to time...