This redo is pretty awesome and it flows a lot faster. Keep up the good work!

keep up the good work

yay naruto has a sister I like her a lot she's cool XD

sakura, why did u have to do that just because he didn't like your really sakura. How mature are you. Not at all I don't think. Shame...Anyway good so far XD

i like it

Wow its really good, i was surpirsed at how well you made the other characters fit in so well with the ones from Naruto :D

I cant wait for more.

i love it, great job XD

great job XD

when will we get to see some ItaNaru actions? so far we've been introduced to other character pairings and i'm kinda confused now that the story kinda shifted over to the other siblings i can understand the urge to explain how the characters will some how meet their lovers but i think most of us readers are expecting some ItaNaru actions soon LOL 3 but it's still awesome is all i gatta say update! 3

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sakura is one fucked up bitch!

It was good, just one thing when you write numbers write the number not just typing in number 5, type in five...Hope that made sense...

you didn't it's a good story

Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.

Happy Holidays!

Please update this story soon, I would like to see how this will turn out in the end!