Loved it the song and the story! I hope you write again another kaido and tomoka story !

Oh my, Kaidou as a collage teacher, that's hard to imagine. Aside from that, I liked it(this story of course). The story is very entertaining to read. Loved the way you synchronize the words with the lyrics. Loved the pairing. And i love the teacher-student relationship. Not that i approve any of it in reality but I've always been a fan of those sorts of lover affair relationship in the fiction world. Oh and not to forget, the way you described their undeniable emotions and how they got together.. nice.. not too sudden, not too rushing or not too slow.. just on the right time. simply nice..

That was adorable I liked this story a lot.

Good job trying to write a story with a song! Good ideas!

Very interesting. i didnt get it since ive never heard of prince of tnnis, but i thought it was interesting and really goo. Great job Gus! :D