I just saw the movie troy and bella could be that girl who is with achilles but I forgot her name do u know who I mean? The girl who was going to be a nun but she was beaten and achilles saves her from the men...anyway I love your story the actress who played helen sorta looked like rosalie too lol

loved the suspense, and the end!

you're an awesome romance novelist )

This is very romantic )

wow this is great the romance begins so soon!

Just a thought, Bella could be based off of Prisaus? Or whomever Achilles falls in love with in the movie. She was also royalty. Just a thought. Love the story though.

Aw! I loved this story so much! It was very well written and the story was unlike anything I have ever read. I loved it (I guess I already said that, but the story deserves it!)!

~Eclipse-Vamp :)

Absolutelty stunning! I loved the way you get to the time era with the langugage, but I must admit I was ready to kill you on several occasions for all the near character deaths. I actually thought you wre going to kill them all off. But the storyline was a great idea. Congrats!

Well, I was only a little disappointed that you moved away from the Troy plotline so drastically. Just a smidgen. I was SO glad that none of the best characters died, so it made it great. Even though there was no horse.

I loved this story, its so sweet! Fave :)

OH MY GOD! (cue scream) AH! That was the most amazing, beautiful story EVER! I swear to God, I was shaking the entire time! My heart was going to explode! I laughed at the most random moments! When my boyfriend walked in to ask about dinner, I screamed at the top of my lungs! It was funny because he got all worried and started asking all these stupid questions! I think I had a heart attack! But anyway, I am in love with this story! You are an amazing author and I am glad I found this story. You have to admit that writing it was even suspensful for you...I know I would've been excited! One last thing, is there going to be a sequal? I know that there's nothing that could continue from that and nothing could possibly top that, but it would be interesting to see what you'd write next. Anyway, love finds a way right? A toast to Love Will Prevail...Amazing!

Okay...LOVE IT!

this story was amazing and oh man you did a great job.

Becca

WOW! This is an amazing story. I love the movie Troy, and the ideas from that were amazing. I loved every minute of it. I also loved that you didn't base all of it from the movie, making everything the same, because them Edward and Jasper both would have died, if you look at who their characters were based after from the movie.

Great work!