0.0 Didn't see that coming.

Very cool story, though. And don't worry, it was pleasantly in-character. (-) There were lots of little touches (like her "sparkly" eyes) that made this a delightful little read.

This pairing needs more love... (u_u)

GAsp keef killed tak!

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But... but Keef is supposed to be all innocent and adorkable and cute and... and now HE'S A MURDERER! D:

That aside, I do really love this story. I just expected the ending would be Tak just leaving him or something, and Keef no being all... killy. Nonetheless, thos is a great fic. And Keef is my fav. character too, next to Lard Nar.

Reminds me a lot of a manga called Boys Next Door. But this was cute in an aww that was kind of creepy way.

I cant be the only one getting some serious JTHM vibes from this, right?

Now I SWEAR I read this before, but apparently before I joined that whole "Review Revolution" thing. XD Anyway, I really DO like this couple, but this seemed a bit too short to really flesh them out. And of course the ending is disturbing, if not entirely inappropriate. (o_0) Though I can't help but wonder if Tak just decided to make a getaway from the planet and erased Keef's memory to frame him? Random theory, I know.

Anyway, nice work and definitely interesting. :-)

Great story!

Wow. I don't normally have an appreciation for fics where my beloved Tak meets her demise, but you did really well. The idea that Keef would murder her to keep from loosing her...just so dark and psychological. Bravo.

Wow... that was pretty. And Keef was funny, kind of like Gir, hardly ever to grasp how serious things can be. He just had a female friend who wanted to do stuff!

...

...and then you killed her, bleep.

WHY'D YOU DO THAT?

Well, you got angered my emotions, so that means that must've been some good writing... RAR, YOU FOL! TAK... *cries*

Wow... Eerie!

... Hocrap, that ending. Wow. This is a beautiful piece. I wonder why Tak was on Earth to begin with - I'm sure her side of the story is QUITE interesting - but, just as it is, I love this fic. Keef doesn't get enough love, unusual pairings like this don't get enough either, and just the idea of Keef snapping like this... I could see him doing that, JtHM-style. "Immortalizing the moment."

This is a very different take on Keef's personality, a take I rather like. Uusually I see Keef in fics ending up the Harmless Queer Kid. Clearly, in this case he's neither queer (well... probably) nor harmless.

Anyway, very nifty. If there's any criticism I can think of, it's that I'd like to know more about why Tak so quickly wanted to hang out with Keef. My guess is that it was just a distraction to keep him from seeing the crater...

Overall, quite awesome. Thank you for writing this. (There need to be more unusual pairings out there.)

Oh, nice take on the craziness, if a bit short. It figures that Keef'd go all nutso, 'cause, y'know...he's hated.

Eh? EH?

Even though I'm a KAZR girl...anything with Keef is good enough for me. I love your narration. It makes me want to lovingly chew upon your elbow.

(Thassa good thing).