This story was amazing you went into so much detail with everything. I hope you make more TSCC fanfic because your amazing at it.

The fanfic line killed me. Frickin KILLED me

Awesome work, thanks for sharing it!

hard to believe he able to hold back .

wow she admits being with a woman .

-grin- That was wonderful! I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I just now found it so I hope you still get this review. Gotta love some terminator smut! Not nearly enough of it in the actually 'verse. I thought your characterizations were very good and I actually liked the ending. Job well done! :)

All i can say is this was hot, and the POV were great!

I don't see any story's like this and you did one hell of a job.

Great work..

L.O.V.E I.T.

Loves me a bit of Jameron smut!

"Come for me" Awesome fanfic dialogue. If only he'd said it in the real show!

Thanks for brightening my day!

I never thought I'd read a story that has a terminator masturbating cuz she's sexually frustrated. Lol.

You write well. I'd read more. Maybe not with all the sex.

John is a horndog in this one.. haha.

I don't read Terminator, but...wow. I've watched two episodes of Sarah conner, so i assume cam is the robot girl?

I had to see when you said there might be smut in Chp three of "Morgan door". Girl, if it's this good for Terminator, can't wait for Chuck/Sarah lol ;P It's not as graphic as some ones I've read, it's more stating the things happening instead of feelings, clinical I guess would be the word i would use...and it's rather thoughtful, which doesn't happen often when writers write sex scenes haha

Btw, I love the title

For a story that started out as little more than smut, it has progressed far. You skillfully mix the sex scenes with the plot, making it all the more masterful. I sincerely look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Lol, well the sex was certainly dramatic enough to be fantasy - loved the quip about bad fanfiction, lol. All in all, this

my girl friend and i thought it was hot... made for a great afternoon.

I have to say after reading this you combine "smut" with great story-telling structure and a knack for getting Cameron's robotic mannerisms down perfectly, making for a great read.

I know how difficult it is to balance the sexual side of story like this with a deeper character-driven plot. And it does tinker on the edge of "oh dear god thats pornographic" but it fits well enough D

I think your POV chapter was great with Cameron and that you're definately one of my fave new writers.

Feel flattered i never usually review this much :P

Right...thats done now i can stop typing so damn neatly lol

and if u have the chance id love if u could read any of my fics. they're Baley stuff (from one tree hill) might not be ur cuppa tea but well...my creative input makes it more than some teen love story.

I know...im an attention seeking review whore. Hate me later :P

Oh! and the fic i refered to is called Lessons in love (cheesy i know)

Mike

I loved this chapter even more, keep up the great work :D