I normally dislike first-person POV fanfics, but I’ve got to say, you use it well! I’m hooked :D

So I found this on another author's favorite list and even though it hasn't been updated in forever I just wanted you to know that I really enjoy it! in the beginning your notes seemed kinda depressed but these last 3 chapters you were rather peppy! Hope you're doing well because people don't say that enough and mean it.

I like the first chapter.

So... I just want to say I love this fic. Yay giant Lizard-Mai! Seriously, I have a major weakness for AU arranged marriage Zutara fics. They're just so fun! Anyway, thanks for the entertainment even if this fic never actually gets to the point where they marry.

Why does every story I read that hasn't been updated in forever end on a cliffhanger?!

I hope you plan to pick up this story again because I absolutely want the next chapter.

Great story! Well written! Why haven't you finished it? Start up-dating it again!

Prolog is a computer language.
The word you want is Prologue.

So since it's almost been another two years since your last update I think you owe us. Anyway I love the story and would love to see how everything works out!

Great story so far! Especially am starting to really like Lady Ai. Iroh, of course, is an amazing character and my favorite in the story. Can't wait for more! :)

I have to say that it doesn't really sound like an ending to me. It's far too ominous to be an ending.

-cd

I really love this story! And also I see you haven't updated in 2391274721874 years...-_-

please update soon!

aaaaaahhhhhh! AWESOME story! i am so full of suspense now! if sokka pops up soon, and toph comes too, my world would be complete (well almost, a horse and mustang convertible would be nice too...)

Good luck with grad school/finding a job. Hopefully you have an opportunity to write again, this fic is absolutely wonderful. I love how you've kept everyone very in character despite different circumstances and how you keep referencing certain things that do happen in the series. I'm very excited about the prospect of having drama without bashing and seeing how katara interacts with mai in the future. I'm waiting for zuko's massive freakout about the dagger and I'm excited for vistors come add to the drama (whether they're family or not). I was wondering if aang is going to appear at all later on or if he's just still disappeared/frozen in ice all this time.

Seriously? You had to stop there? I'm new to the fandom but so far your fic has quickly turned me into an addict. I love your use of description, not to mention the lack of any galring/ noticeable grammatical errors. I hope you get the chance to update in the near future. You have a gift for writing and a knack for leaving your audience wanting more!

I LOVE THIS STORY! It is so well written! I love the long chapters, the charachter building, the foreshadowing. I can not wait for more story! I love the depth!

Please continue writing such amazing stories!

oxoxx sailorvickii