Hah, I never thought of that. I like Erk the Sage better than Erk the Mage though. And the ending was a nice twist.

"Jaffar was sulking, standing stubbornly with his arms crossed, plainly trying to ignore the wild waves of black cloth fluttering around his stable body." -Because Jaffar's just THAT awesomely bad- $$. XD

Later.

SoS

It was actually pretty good. Wasn't that corny. Quite nice to see that Erk does have more people who care about him.

i love it. you should continue it. I love everything. i wouldn't change it! Keep writing!