this story is great! please update soon!

That kiss was awfully rushed considering the amount of time that the two have spent together throughout the story. I like the idea of their pokemon pitching together to cause it, but that'd be good later in the story and having them have a tension build up, you know? Maybe Pearl gets caught and Officer Jenny makes her travel with Paul to keep her out of trouble. I like the main concept though but may I suggest a team make over because all Evee evolve forms on a team has been used time and time again and I think you could work with more plot ideas if you had a more diverse team. If you have any questions or comments on this review message me because I would love to help out if you need it.

Best Regards,

i88

This is pretty good so far. Man, I was totally thinking about writing a story with a Team Rocket girl who thought what she did was wrong. But the idea's been taken by you already! Lol!

aww such a 101 dalmation moment

haha i just knew that was coming and ya know i cant help but to think there should be a pokemon game where u could choose to be a trainer or a team rocket but hay so far it hasnt happened..nice goin by the way i really like the story!_!

O.o No comment on the, uh... kiss there. Although, it seems pretty different from your others. Yay! Uniqueness! Love it!

That was brillant and very well written. I like this story alot.

Hi, I think both of your chapters our awesome keep up the good work!

This is a good story - I liked it alot.

you called Electabuzz an Elekid in one of your sentances

Cooleo! I can't wait to see what she cooked up!

I feel slightly, SLIGHTLY, bad for Paul since he lost his electubuz (sp?)

Remember only slightly!

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!