Oh wow! There are big time turtles hiding in the bathroom, creepy as hell. Ooo bad hit to the head...

Morgon's Aunt is weirder than Cameron is and even more silly.:)

Hmm...someone is watching her but who and what do he/she want exactly? Oh and seeing the window opened and a moved teddy bear, would make me go panicked!:)

Great! It was well structured and that guy...Cameron oh golly he sounds and is a major jerkface. :)

This might make me sound like really stupid... but what does AU mean?

Anyways, such a sweet story!

Such a good story. :)
Love the little hints of fluff every now and then. :)

Haha, love it! Nice chapter. :)
Gunna keep reading.

Cool.

SWEET! XD I LOVED it! - Can you send me a link or summthin' to the sequel?

AW!

And, LOL Mikey! ;)

I love it. Absolutely love it. I expected this to be a humorous/silly story, and you took it a lot deeper than I expected.

I'm a big fan of "hangin' with the guys" stories. I think they're harder to write because you have to get into the characters' heads a little more than simple slash/action plots.

I like the journal-entry style, too, that made it fun to read. It reminds me of a book, Longer Letter Later by Paula Danzinger. (also a great read)

This is awesomely well done. I love the ending, which switches to "real life" time. It was a very satisfying ending. Makes me sad, though, to think of the struggles that lay ahead... Like when her folks want to meet her new boyfriend! :/ And what if they want to get married some day... I wonder if this can last... It reminds me so much of hubby and I when we were first dating.

I hope it works out well. If anyone deserves happiness, it's Don.

I'll be looking for the sequel. :D

Happy writing

Rejoicing in the day,

-Mary

Oh wow... wow... I've been reading w/out reviewing because I'm so caught up in the story, but holy crap I'm amazed Don didn't kick the SHELL outta Raph! LMAO What an absolutely perfect moment. I could so see Raph doing that. LOL Rotten brother that he is.

Awesome. I love this. Great insight into the guys, and I love that it's Don-centric, he doesn't get much screen time compared to his more outgoing brothers. Awesome, and I love that you've stayed so in-character with him. Very well written.

Rejoicing in the day,

-Mary

This was such a great story! I can't wait for the sequel, you must post it as soon as possible.

I absolutely loved it when Don beat the snot out of Cameron. And my favorite part was the ending.

But, there was no 'problem'. Kris didn't get kidnapped or her life threatened and Don didn't come in and save her. Otherwise, this was excellent!

OH GOOD GREAT SWEET STARS! I LOVE this story!

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I WUV IT! this story is SO

outstandingly sweet, interesting, double times romantic,

and fascinating. i hope i can find romantic stories like this one.

story seems deeply real. is there a sequel to this? if so, i have got to find it. if not, i hope there will be a nice and interesting sequel to this story soon. thanks for the sweet story. i really

like it -

Woohoo! Hooray for you!

:D

Nice work it was so CUTE!

...but I'm still jealous.

Oh well, I guess I'll have to accept that he's a cartoon character someday. I said nothing about someday being today.

;)

Wanna read the sequel so bad now!

The Light Of Reason

She's right, Donnie is awesome! He's, like...like...like SUPERMAN!

And SHE GOT TO KISS HIM?

I'm very jealous now.

Oh well, I guess it's Raph's fault. Raphie, you sly dog!

Keep up the excellent work!

The Light Of Reason

What, it's over? NO!DX You must make a sequel soon, or the dragons will eat you!