i L.O.V.E. this story. you're writing in a beatiful way and the two of them splitting up is refreshing. i know that it maybe sounds weird but it is something different from what you're usually reading here, so thumbs up. it's great :)

Wee, glad I followed the link on your name because I ended up finding more Malex-y goodness! Too bad I have to work in the morning. Curses! Oh, well, there's always tomorrow...

honestly...i love the ending...i could bearly read through all the details of this story cuz it was just pissing me off...i dont like reading or seeing paracitic relationships and that says alot for me to not read as weird as that seems (just means it had its desirded effect). Anyway I love the story love the ending...and now im gonna read the sequel! :)

this fiction makes me cry everytime.

Marissa isn't gay, you're gay. Stop writing for this ship, it ain't ever gonna happen. Ryan and Marissa go way back.

T_T Poor Alex, she has to suffer all alone. :(

okay that, made me cry. teary-eyed. couldn't sob in front of a pc. would've looked ridiculous with people around and all. sniff. hope things will be explained on the sequel :)

in all honesty, i have read many fics but no fic has ever done this to me...cry...it made me cry...for real...it was so sad and painful...i feel like i'm gonna cry all over again...

i'm thankful that you're posting a sequel already...i want a happy ending...please please...and to think that you haven't explain the side of marissa...

i'm gonna count on you...

Okay...Awesome writing. Detail, words, everything. But can I ask...Why are so many people writing such depressing endings? Again...great work. Just so not helping with my ulcer.

damn.. that's the saddest ending i've ever read.. can't really describe what i want to say and feel right now.. im gonna wait patiently for the sequel and wish that malex can find a way to be together again.. [you made me cry a bit because of this..( ]

but thanks for sharing this..

that was depressing. I was expecting Marissa to see the present Alex bought her in the apartment because Taylor said she left it at the apartment. I can't wait for the sequel, the humor and dialog was great. I actually laughed, which is rare and it was sweet and had a range of emotions. Nicely done. Post the sequel asap because you left it at a cliff hanger.

wow! that ending was really heartbreaking..can't blame alex for leaving that way she was really hurt by marissa's action..i hope you will do the sequel coz i want to know too what happened to marissa when she was away with alex.. what was alex's gift to marissa? great ending.. can't wait for the sequel.. thanks!:D

*gasp* oh my god!

That was a very heartbreaking chapter *sniff, sniff*

It sucked that Alex thought less about herself... Marissa's actions over the previous chapters didn't help much. I'm really really intrigued about what happened with her, when she was god knows where, apart from Alex.

And yeah of course i'm interested in the sequel! Start it right now! hehehe

Thank u for this amazing story

O.M.G. that ending was so heartbreaking! I never thought Alex would leave like that! I don't know who to feel more sorry for, Alex or Marissa. You have to write a sequel! Although I thought the line you used to end it was fantastic, this story was just too good to not be continued.

Awesome story!

P.S. what was Alex's gift gonna be? Taylor said she left it at Alex's place.

You better have a sequel planned -I love this story! I'm kind of surprised by the ending, but I have to admit that was very well-timed. It's a great ending.