Really good story. Well written!

Really good story! I liked that episode! Glad McCoy admitted to Kirk his own bad actions, I respect him more. That Boma tho! Oye!

Good job on this story. I enjoyed it very much!

Very logical and good. ;)

Characters are very true to the series. I like the interactions. Please add more to this.

It is a very good, well thought out story, it'd deserve more review than that. Thank you for it, I really enjoyed the conversations and that you kept the three of them IC.

Read this before but I don't believe I've reviewed-excellent story! Well-written, IC and plausible :)

Cheers,

Cat

This is a well written epiloge for the episode. I'm amazed by your ability to write both Kirk and Spock, you've done it so good. I enjoyed reading very much! Is the story finished, or are you going to continue?

I love this story! I think you write both Spock and Jim (and McCoy) wonderfully. You did a great job of portraying their friendship, as well as Spock's response to the events in the episode.

Keep writing!

Very good - very in character. :)

The show should have shown an ending like this. It resolved everything beautifully.

Wonderful take on a particularly difficult situation.

This is great, I always felt uncomfortable with the outcome of this episode. Will Kirk give Spock a more detailed analysis of his mistakes and the actions he only perceives as mistakes? Will he tell him how to insist on his position more firmly? Will Boma be reprimanded (please)? Hope there will be an update soon.

That was a good workthrough of the events - the comments Kirk made during the conversation were a good addition and the chapter end came off well. That was pretty well done. I liked the suggestion that they move to a 'comfortable area' and Kirk election to remain in Spock's quarters. Spock's reaction to Kirk's suggestion of Boma's reprimand was also good.

This was an interesting discussion. Not a whole lot has happened so far, but Kirk may be getting somewhere. I like McCoy's complaints and stuff again and I like Spock's clipped replies about his injury and how doesn't doesn't plan to risk re-injury and such.