| Reviews for Exordium |
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itsyoboii chapter 8 . 3/12/2013 Love the Chappie :D *new reader here ... (o)o* |
lageanie chapter 9 . 5/25/2011 Damn it write more!:-# |
lageanie chapter 9 . 5/25/2011 Damn it write more!:-# |
taity chapter 9 . 6/30/2008 I have to say I would never have paired these two up, but it works so well! And what's more, they tryst in PAris - the city of love :) Please say that you have a few more chappies for us to read? You cannot leave us on a cliffy... |
MegFallow chapter 9 . 6/19/2008 Oh my god! THIS IS AWESOME! I love the story of these two, please don't keep us in suspence, is she pregnant, are they going to break up, have they been found out? WHAT! I HAVE TO KNOW! Please update as soon as you can. |
blacksand1 chapter 9 . 6/18/2008 D8 Nu! DX I thought it would last longer... DX WHY? Calm down Blacksand, calm... |
Cannot fathom a PenName chapter 9 . 6/18/2008 Yay! An update! So happy! You have a teensy mistake. It’s smooth shiny surface. Wrong its you silly girly. I know that's just a typo, but my grammar nazi speaks, and I must obey! But, a very good chapter, so excited for you to update again. To the w00t! |
blacksand1 chapter 8 . 6/17/2008 There really isn't enough MXI out there XD Thanks for filling the gap in my life with this fic XD |
InFairWingHellsing chapter 8 . 3/14/2008 Oh what a story. Keep going like this *thumbs up* |
Cannot fathom a PenName chapter 8 . 3/12/2008 I love how I read that and immediately knew that this chapter was going to be Guy Fawkes night. Remember remember the 5th of november, the gun powder treason and plot... I used to know the whole thing, I only know the first, like, 8 lines now. I should rememorize. I DIGRESS I love Sir Islands, can he join our Hellsing polygamy ring? |
boney chapter 8 . 3/12/2008 XDD THat's right! A Catholic priest making love to a Protestant to honor the church. There's so many things wrong with that sentance. xDD Awesome fic, update soon. |
Selene08 chapter 8 . 3/12/2008 LOVED IT!Awesome job! As for suggestions, hmm...romeo and juillete definetely. Have them both see each other during meetings and act like their usual selves. But when they leave each other they cannot help but think of one another and how they wish to see each other again. Until finally they see each other and they just can't help themselves, they just have to be together! But then, they are both stopped from seeing each other because the Pope and the Queen both forbid it. And then they are forced against each other when they really just want to love each other. Possibly some battle scense maybe but i'd keep it in mostly drama. Also, some might say have Alucard go for Sir Integra as well with this, but I don't think you should because then its just way to many plotlines going on. Unless you wanted Integra to have a struggle between the two of know, who does she choose? Anways! Good work! |
alice chapter 6 . 3/10/2008 very funny yet very romantic, i love it |
MegFallow chapter 7 . 3/10/2008 This chapter was so cute. I loved the part when Maxwell throws up after inhaling one second of a cigar. And it made them more innocent and playful. Keep up the good work. |
Selene08 chapter 7 . 3/9/2008 HAHAHAHAA! I loved the last line! You did really well with this fic! Keep up the good work! |