This is cute and exactly what I needed to read tonight

Subaru and mishra could probably play both roles. Subaru usually is more organized than Misora but I think that if it was really important she could buckle down, get serious and help Subaru.

I loved this years ago, and I love it still. Yeah, this is about right, at least for some versions of these characters.

This was the best, and such a refreshing change from the other 95% of bad fics around. Yours was more genuine and down to earth, and the mistakes on Misora's parts are actually plausible because she would most likely have an assistant, or I think that was your train of thought.

This fic was sweet like a Piece Of Cake.

I especially liked the proposal, and that you didn't go on and on on long introspections.

Kura: Hahahahahaha! That was the best story of those two i've ever read!

Berry: I agree. Their relationship would be like that and Subaru would seem more of the wife between the two.

Kura: I love the pairing and all but I can't seem to like the lovey-dovey stories people make about them :) you, dear writer, made my day by writing this fic :D

Berry: hehe...Subaru's the wife...

Kura: thanks again for the awesome one-shot! XD

Wow. This is such an awesome take on their relationship xD

That was brillant. You are a stunner youkomon.

I rather enjoyed this story. It was cute, short and believable. Sonia Strumm always seemed rather down to earth to me, but I assume you've based Misora's personality on her anime one so I can't really comment on that. Subaru's reliability, however, I can completely see.

I really, really liked how Misora proposed, though.

Funny. You have got to do something with when they have kids. XD

This is certainly an interesting take on their relationship. You're also the first one I've seen to use the characters' original names. Nonetheless, this was an interesting read.

How should I say this...

...Wow.

I never thought of them that way... I hope you won't mind if I incorporate that into my works...

Now for the review.

Even they are different in some aspects, they are able to smooth things out and become more than friends. Nice. What's really interesting is that they're much older in this fic (in their 20s, perhaps?) and they manage to act childish.

Some extremely humorous scenes... Especially your end line, as it suggested something very peculiar... XD

Having the gal propose to the guy is a surprise... A good plot twist.

Overall: Well written, with a decent plot and high level words, which leads to good details. A couple of things could have been expressed a little more, mainly the finale.

...This is a respectable piece of work. Now, if only if I could do the same for my story...