I don't know crap about medical stuff either (except what I've seen on House!), but it sounded pretty convincing! I sorta thought it was House screwing with her the whole time, until he mentioned the thing with Amber, and I was going "what? what with Amber?", and the end... Awesome.

hmmm...concrit...um, fixnot liking this piece, cause it's really awesome.

I like your fic pretty much. Thirteen/Amber is not my favourite, but you wrote them pretty cute together

Great one-shot.

Thirteen/Amber?

I like it )

It seems like you really researched the medical stuff, or at least made it sound convincing, and it reminded me of actually watching an episode of House...

So yeah, nice job )

very well-written. I loved the ending!

I like this story A LOT!

If you don't mind, I added this to my community, which focauses on Thirteen.

I hope to see more pieces done by you soon!

Ara

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I really liked this one.

Hope you write more soon.

:)