great story _ you should write more to it

yay! totally romantic...i swear, when Ayumu said she looked like a "Narumi Hiyono" I jumped from my seat in shock.

who knew he could be so charming? and this was sweet!

cheers! & merry christmas!

Oh this is such a good story! I love it, because it seems so real...I love what you did with Narumi Hiyono...that was beautiful work.

"I know you

who are you now?

look into my eyes if you can remember

do you remember?"

this song... "never be the same" by Red reminds me of the second chapter. I love the song, and I really like this fic, it was really good and I cried a little in the middle of the second chapter... thanks for writing this story

ITS SO CUTE!

love this story it was to cute

whoa...TTTT I like you! XD and also your stories! They are always so good and not exaggerating

I wonder what happened to Ayumu...

Though I have no idea (maybe I forgot) who is Kyo, but this story is good...I like this...

oh my...

THAT WAS AWSOME-NESS!

-cheers- that just left me breathless

that was awsome.

there all in character too! even in the end!

I loved how Ayumu-kun proposed to Hiyono!

that was so cute

i also like how the two other caracters where happy in the end too. (Kyo left to go marry mitsuki unafraid of what his parents would think. I like how there was that realisation of who she really loved!

moral of the story: make sure your ready for the marriage step before you do it cause its true its forever!(unless you devorce but thats cheating!((and now that you meantion it its probably no fun either!))

great job

an eploge wouldnt over do it if you dont go over the top. fore example you could do an epiloge thats there wedding scene but only a part of it and say that hiyono was truly happy and end it there OR you could have the side people's wedding scene.

its up to you just dont get to over the top and detailed. the point of an epiloge is to conclude it but make it vague and eatching cause it gives more possibilities for after that!

thanks for sharing!

wohoo!

love it!

Narumi Hiyono does sound nice!

muhahahahahaha!

more AyumuHiyono fics please!

OMG. You killed me with with this. I've never read a Ayumu/Hiyono fic that's gotten me to melt into a puddle of goo quite like this one has. I love how you've made Ayumu so well.. I guess, romantic and lovesick. XD We don't get see that very much. * EPILOGUE, PLEASE!

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Gosh. You're horrible T_T the first chapter made my heart skip a beat. :]

And Narumi is funny. I really like this! T_T

I hope there'll be a epilogue.

Oi my! This was wonderful! (grand applause) ah so sweet...I lovesd it! A genius plot! (Wish I would've thought of it myself) I love how you constructed such a wonderful wedding-ish(I hereby dub that a word, as of two seconds ago) sweet sighable(same with that one) romance...ah...(another girlish sigh)

Again, I greatly applaud your work! Excellent grammar, etc etc, I loved how romantic it was and still in character...But I'd have to say my favorite part was when Hiyono was fumbling for the phone then she heard Ayumu's voice from the doorway and turned around to find that it was him all along! Then he explained his whole 'diabolical' plot to get her back, Aya! I loved it! It made me want to squeal, laugh, and jump up and down dancing and doing the cha-cha all at the same time!

If it were me I probably would've either died, fainted, died from choking on my own gasp, or knocked him down when I tackle-hugged him. Anywho, twas perfectly executed and I absolutely adored Ayumu and Rio's Taxi Cab Runaway Bride plot...and when Ayumu revealed his whole plot, etc etc...LOVED IT! COOKIES! (Don't eat them! Hiyono and a delerious drunken skunk probably cook better than I do) Tootles and God bless ya!

Thank you for updating! I love it. Great job on the story.