Love this so much this is exactly the kind of story I have been looking and you are the only one who has had it!

Even though his is an older story, I still wanted to leave you a review, for doing such a good job with this fanfic. Stories that expose Mustang's office crew to the realities of Edward's automail are few and far inbetween. I wish there were more of them. I think you covered the situation better than canon, as the only time in canon that the crew directly interacted with Ed and his automail situation was right after the Scar incident, and every one of them was more than a little insensitive about it. Yeah, maybe they were trying to get a rise out of Ed to cheer him up, but it came off as being very un-empathetic for what Ed and All had just gone through, and had been living with for years at that point. So thank you for a very enjoyable read. I hope one day you'll feel like revisiting Fullmetal Alchemist, and writing more fiction for the series.

i fell like you really nailed the characters. eds just lucky it was his arm and not his leg.

That was awesome!

Also a good insight- I mean, I don't think the people that Ed is around really realize that he's a double amputee. With automail and how well he uses it... I think it would be really something for them to see that yes- Ed is missing an arm and a leg. I mean, intelectualy they would know- but that's different from actualy seeing it.

Kawaii~ I love the idea of how enthralled "the military gang", as I call them, is. It's wonderful! D *likeys story lotz*

hahaha! poor ed! This was really cool though! :D

lol i love how Winry goes on a automail rant very funny

This is a nice little snapshot, and you've captured all the characters well - the detail of Mustang flirting with Winry, Fuery's curiosity getting the better of his queasiness, etc.

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I really liked this. I wish you had made it a bit longer though! Though I'm all for pushing poor Ed to his limits with the automail!

Thanks for a great read!

Sg

This is real interesting how you have Winry give a detail 'lecture' on Ed's aoutmail. *Blushes* I was wondering is it alright if I use her 'lecture' for a story I'm working on?

Nice! you sounded pretty professional there with the automail! Kudos on that, it gets kind of hard writing about something that's supposed to be complex that you basically have no references on. :)

Amusing.

Thank you so much! It's even better than what I had imagined! It’s perfect in every way! I apologize for causing you so much trouble though, I truly am. And especially if you feel sick, you could have waited you felt well again, I don’t mind waiting. But wow, you really did an excellent job on this! I love you so much! (In a reader to author way of course, heh heh) Thanks for writing it and getting every detail perfect! Don’t worry ‘bout the lack of angst, I was in the mood for a more upbeat story anyways. Good job! I do realize this review is getting rather long, so I’ll leave you alone now. :D But seriously, THANK YOU SO MUCH!

-F&F