Interesting! Have you retired from fic, or any chance this has been continued on another site?

Hm, interesting. I liked your fight scenes, that "lost in the dark"-asmosphere as well as how you handlerd the flashbacks.

Just read through the BT chapters and I have to say well done.

That ending is a bit WTF also does it seem like the focus has shifted off of Ryo or is that just me?

Hope Takato gets better.

Any chance you'll be continuing this or your other stories anytime soon?

How did Davis know who Henry was even though he had never met Henry, formally? Good work. Keep it up.

Takato does know who Henry and Rika are, even if Tai and Davis don't? Good chapter, going to read the next one.

Overall I think this is a good chapter. The fight scenes don't feel forced, and the interaction between Rika and Davis I found to be the best part since both of their personalities really shined and clashed.

But I just realized that I missed a mistake when betaing this chapter.

Line: Daisuke was vaguely aware that all battles around them had seized

'Seized' should be 'ceased'. My mistake. Don't know how I missed that.

Davis suddenly speaking as though he were Yggdrasil was kind of spooky, and I'm interested in seeing what happens as a result. So far, it's an excellent start to an interesting continuation of the story. :)

'Till next chapter.

-Crazyeight

Yay for update! This is my favorite of your stories, and I can't wait for the next update. Good job.

An interesting development. I wonder how this will affect things. Hope to see more soon.

I rather liked this chapter as it moved with a decent amount of fluidity and had a lot of action on top of it. The characters reactions to the Tamers as they showed up was by far the best, though I felt that Takato should still have been a little bit more upfront in trying to figure out what was going on before trying to get people to stop. Interesting bit with the black hole thing. I take it that Takato, Taichi, and Daisuke are the only ones who can see it? Seems weird. On the whole, I felt this was one of your better chapters and definitely a good one for not having written anything for so long.

Can't wait to see where you go from here. :P

'Till then.

-Crazyeight

Rika 3 Gogglehead trouble for everyone. Even if you ignore the fact there is a blackhole.

So Ryo's going to try to restore his memories and the Goggle Heads are now in danger of being wiped out along with Takato's Home Universe's Earth. So it didn't matter that they stole when everything is going to be erased for now. Good chapter. Keep it up.

Funny. I could have sworn that I fixed all of the italics issues that you had when you sent me your chapter. Or is this a flashback?

Anyway, a pretty good chapter that highlights some of the differences that have cropped up in the various worlds since Milleniummon has taken over. Davis is a pretty obvious one but I can’t help but wonder if anything that is different in Takato’s ‘world’ is going to be important.

One spot where Takato is thinking needs to be in italics. It’s in the beginning right before Takato snatches the two decks and makes a run for it.

Other than that, a good chapter, though rather slow progression. ‘Till next time.

-Crazyeight

Why do you refer to Tai and Davis as Taichi and Daisuke one moment and then have the kid refer to them as Tai(American Nickname) and Davis(English name)? Why did you have Takato steal? Why couln't they just go back to ENIAC and ask for money? Will Takato pay the Shopkeeper back for stealing the cards? Why couldn't they just explain the truth to him even if it was a bit wild to believe? Davis knocked out the shopkeeper with his D-Power not a metal pipe? Right? This is one dark chapter and they haven't even fought an evil Digimon. Good work. Keep it up.

How could the Digidestined remember Ryo if he went to their pasts before they met him (Brave Tamer)? I just found the source of the images that I referred to and I saw translations of the dialogue and they acted as though he was familiar to them when they were in situations in their past well before Millenniummon. Did Ryo actually meet Atanasoff? From what I read (on this site) he simply went into Atanasoff's domain and defeated the dark clones of the leaders. What does Ryo mean by ENIAC holding the portal open to "the other Digital World"? "So... my lost of memory is duplicated elsewhere before and if it is like a condition..." You said lost instead of loss. Lost is the past tense of lose, one of which definitions is to be deprived of something one once had (In this case Ryo's memories). One of Loss' definitions is the act or an instance of losing (Ryo losing his memories). Sorry to give a whole grammar lesson. "Ryo's face involuntarily spread itself into a wide grin, despite his best efforts to conceal the excitement that suddenly burst in him, feeling his entire body with enthusiasm of the like he never recalled feeling before." You accidentally said feeling instead of filling. Just saying that feeling is the experience of a sensation while one definition of filling is to build up the level of (Ryo's enthusiasm). Sorry to give a grammar lesson once again. Is Jjimon a bit deaf and senile at all? Good story! Keep it up.