this is great! anymore coming?

continue?

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Update this is really good!

Nice chapter. This was nice written. I hope to read more soon.

i'm really liking this story! plz update really soon!

great story too bad that happen to Serena and her parents didn't believe her

Interesting...I look forward to this story picking up

*silver moon goddess

dam that seiya, and who was the guy tht wanted her to beat him up?

Yes! Finally an update. And I am happy to hear that you will be updating on a (hopefully) weekly basis from now on.

The human version of Artemis is Mina's manager? Nice touch.

Now let's just see where you can take this.

Good job.

love it. please update soon. pretty please

The best stories are usually the ones that are updated the slowest... 'sigh!'

Looking forward to your continuation - hopefully, soon...?

This story is frought (Real Word? I think so) with possibilities. I can't wait to see where you're next adventure takes these characters.

I think you have done an excellent job characterizing the P.O.V. character through her reaction to the rape and you have shown us much about her old boyfriend and her family. Shown, not told, as you may know is the best way to go most times, and you have kept the showing brief enough for a short story, almost surgical really, which I prefer.

You're concern over chapter brevity is one you should not worry about too much. You're scenes are exactly that, scenes. You're character is involved with her suroundings, with other characters, even her own body in the mirror scenes, and all reflection/introspection is tucked neatly into the action and gives us a glimpse into her own thoughts.

I would suggest allowing her feelings about her family and her boyfriend to remain in a conlicted state for a while. She loved all of them very much up untill two days ago, so there is a part of her that likely finds it difficult to hate them all forever. But by god did they ever wrong her! What a tragic series of events. I knew you could pull a story off with this kind of depth, but I have to tell you I was surprised at how well these first five chapters turned out. And who knew Sailor Moon could inspire such an engrossing plot? And such interesting characters. As a guy I must say I am immediately drawn to the high-end escort you have created here, and I am highly interested in the role she will play in the new life for our devastated young woman. Will she be lured into a life as an escort as well? And how will her new psychological issues affect her as she carries out her, um, duties? And will she find love out there on the job? Outside the job? And where does the politician father fit in? The unforgiving mother? The rapist ex? And will thier actions come back to bite them in the butt? I can't wait to hear what you have to show us. Keep workin, girl.

can't wait to read more, please update soon

Tell me that something is going to happen to Seiya

UPDATE PLEASE!