| Reviews for The Begining of the End |
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SonSanbi23 chapter 9 . 11/11/2017 This is an awesome read. I gotta say though, those demon hunters could become a threat later in the story for naruto. I mean what happens when they find holy water? And where is konan? She could have turned out to be one heck of a priestess with her paper kekei genkai(bloodline) Anyways, please continue to update this fic, I really am enjoying it(fist pump) |
Revanchist21 chapter 9 . 6/2/2017 This story is getting good. Keep up the good work man! |
shelbys a cunt chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 its fucking awesome you dirty motherfucking cumsucking cuntlicking whoremongering fuckbag keep writing this stufff or i will come to your house and fuck your mother in the ass and then kill your whole fucking family do you understand. ps your mother has a hot body that i fuck again and again for the rest of her life you stupid son of a whore understand. and my name is shelby |
TEAM SasuNaruHina chapter 9 . 3/10/2013 contuie pleaswe |
macdaddy chapter 3 . 12/24/2011 awsome story |
Snake King chapter 9 . 10/24/2011 hey i think u should finish writing this story all the way until the destruction of the leaf village |
Shin-Kai1017 chapter 9 . 11/28/2010 u make great stories keep it up |
fanofmany chapter 9 . 11/20/2010 Pretty interesting that Kakashi is a vamp..lol I swore he was gonna be something similar to that creature jeepers creepers (scarecrow) XD |
mama-Ichigo chapter 9 . 11/6/2010 THAT WAS SO GOOOD, I ALWAYS THOUGHT THAT NARUTO WAS A BADASS! THANK YOU FOR PORTRYING HIM THE WAY I ALWAYS SAW IT LOL |
Itachisgirl88 chapter 9 . 11/5/2010 WOW storys really good so far |
shadowelf144 chapter 9 . 10/27/2010 ee this is the most bloody savage thing i have read and i love it thank you author |
Dark Insomniacs chapter 9 . 10/21/2010 Minato banging Tsume priceless great story the best evil Naruto story I've read. |
Kingkakashi chapter 9 . 10/19/2010 Well, once again it's nice to see this updated again. But once a year updates is going to cost you readers. I had to reread the entire story just to get caught up on it again. A good chapter, you did an excellent job conveying what's happened over the last six years in the story. I liked the oc Lucy-chan, but I would have liked to have also seen a favorite child produced from Hinata as well in the story. Interesting twist resurrecting Minato and Kushina although I have a difficult time believing Naruto or Kushina would be happy with Minato sleeping with Tsume on the side. There is one thing that you seem to have forgotten about in the story and its the dreams Naruto was having of a ruby-eyed lady and her friend helping him when he was younger. I'm guessing those two ladies are Kurenai and perhaps Anko and I'm hoping they will be joining Naruto's harem soon in the story. I'm looking forward to seeing what Naruto will do once Sarutobi finally passes on. Keep up the good work and please don't wait so long between updates on this. |
Keytoviktory chapter 9 . 10/19/2010 Genocide, the killings of children, villages massacered, ol' snakey blown to bits, i gotta say , you got a fucked up mind to write this, and i'm glad you do, i've never been a dark fic read as there is none that are good out there, or the 1s that are are left abondoned, such a shame really, but this 1 i like, i read it along time ago and i stumbled upon it again, and i think i only have two gripes with this fic, no lemons, and i want to see the Demon of The Mist hack, and slash, and dismember, and mutilate to his hearts content, you musn't forget that while deaomns, hybrids are great implemtns of fear nothing will make people shit them selves more that an ox of a man hacking away like nightmare from soul calibur, (side note TURN ZABUZA INTO NIGHTMARE), i hope this reaches you and god bless your twisted mind |
karthik9 chapter 9 . 10/19/2010 it is good chapter |