Loved it. :)

So Djaq just walks into the camp full of dudes... in a blanket XD just a little awkward!

Um, at the end of the story you say Is-haq isn't a very good fighter, yet at the begining you say he was "too much for Djaq" - whom we all know is an expert fighter. So it's kind of making a bit of an injustice, don't you think? ) Maybe instead of him overpowering her at the beginig, she could have been distracted by Will fighting one of the Is-haq's buff guards or overpowered by one of them instead... just an idea. )

Enjoyed it? It was outstanding! ) Yep, seriously enjoyed it! So cute and fluffy and deep and well written! Eek I shall soon melt from fluff-overdose...

This is great!

LittleMissEvil

Oh my could you imagine the gang's reaction!

"Erm is there ar particular reason why is Djaq is naked,"

"Oh we were picking flowers and just fell into the water,"

"... is that another oxymoron?"

I loved this! I love the way you describe the way the Sheriff hides even though he knows he doesn't need to...

That was brilliant, I hope you write some more stories like that!

An awesome end chapter to an awesome story! I was kinda hoping that Will would go after Allan, after he tried to put the moves on Djaq, but of course her fiancee was a much more fitting target.

Looking forward to Allan getting whats coming to him in your next story! Loved this one! Can't wait for more!

AWW Will and Djaq are so cute together. Love the story. :D

Fantastic ending. The image of the water and the sunshine was very beautiful.

Have a thousand helium balloons! Because I'm feeling completely HIGH off this story.

So beautiful and heartpinchingly raw. The descriptions were hypnotising, as usual.

keep writing xox

Wow, great story. I really enjoyed it.

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lovely story x

aww omg that was so sweet