Don’t know why but I didn’t even think about Andy. Was wracking my brains as to who it could be outside Torchwood and just could not hunk of anybody except Rhys and knew it wouldn’t be him. Just glad it wasn’t Ianto or Jack.

Just had to do it - google the 2012 Olympics logo. Had never noticed anything odd about it at the time. Now I can see what Ianto saw.

Well... i read this to chap 24 then go straight to 82. I'd been enjoying those 20s chapters so i compelled to say something. It's been enjoyable. I really like the concept. I cried at some parts. It is THAT beautiful. But I don't continue to read. I can't. Its only personal opinion though. I found it was thrown to an entirely new universe since ofc came. Like its not Torchwood anymore.. But aside of that, i really like your style of writing. I like how Ianto's personality is complicated without making him too out of character. And i like Owen's too. I wish you still continue to write even after these years. Best regards.

Either Ianto is lying about his age in this chapter or you miscalculated it. He should be 21. (Sorry, I'm picky about these things. Just had to let you know.)

Wow this has been a bumpy ride for the boys, Ianto, Jack and Owen, glad they are trying to piece the pieces together. I don't hate Michela, she must have been a difficult character to write, to get the right amount of compassion for Ianto and then walk away from him when he betrayed her by his declaration.
I don't know who I want Ianto end up with, Jack or Michela as they both have their merits and their faults, maybe Ianto should find someone new.

Wheew. It's intense. I've read those 27 chapters in one go and I must say I'm addicted. But this chapter, wow, it's beaten every chapter in this story in intensity, I'm bitting my fingernail here. You're absolutely amazing, you've created such a gripping, captivating and overwhelming story I can't stop reading, I just can't tear my eyes away from the screen even for a minute. It's amazing how well the story is written. I used to be annoyed at flashbacks in stories, they always made the action go slow and I usually got impatient. Yet here there are essential, I can't imagine not knowing what's been in the past, what's happened. I LOVE OWEN. I usually don't like him, and when I saw that he's Ianto's brother in this story I just scoffed. However, I was wrong to scoff, it's the most brilliantly explained and pulled off idea I've ever read. It's bloody amazing. I can't stop admire how good this stuff is. You've pictured the impossible situation they've got themselves in so perfectly. I can't say I'd like to be in their shoes now. The way Ianto is behaving, unpredictably and with a little hint of danger, it's adding to the edge of this fantastic, fabulous story. I totally love it. Gonna rush to read more!

I know that you wrote this fic a long time ago, so I am glad that I happen to come across it (it was favourited by someone who favourited one of mine, actually a bit similar to yours here and yet quite different)
Well what can i say but WOW, this is so well written and the story idea has everything, and I love that Owen and Ianto are related, I just love these boys.
I probably won't write a review for all of your 80 or so chapters that i've saw that is up but just know that I am really enjoying this fic and the story line even with the 'difficult to read' bits of hurt to Ianto, I know that these are hard to write but necessary for the story.

Great story! Thank you for sharing :)

Andy and Michaela, huh? I liked him in the show, especially in COE. He's a great guy, but can he handle Micka?

I love the banter!

Love the way Ianto told Gwen off.

Maybe Jack should have invited Micka to join them?

No wonder Micka is obsessed with Jack...

Awww. LOVE Rhys - he's like a huggable teddy bear!

Loving the fluffiness of this chapter, especially their plan to torture Owen by being cute and domestic together. LOL!