UGH. I was so well written! I already liked the story by itself but your author's note had me literally freaking out! How smart! I love when writers do little winks and nudges to small details like that :'D Great job!

And Magnus...oh Magnus.

Made me cry, poor Gunther. The ending was bittersweet, but satisfying

Oh my. Poor Shade, and more importantly poor Gunther :,( I think Dragon should just turn Magnus into charcoal then he can't be mean to anybody anymore! And the ending made me smile XD once again lovely written

Rose xx

Little Gunther and a kitten? Cutest combination. Little Gunther and dead kitten? Most tragic combination. This story? Perfect.

That was the most beautiful, well thought out and perfect story I have ever read.

Thank you for sharing this stunning little diamond with us, thank you for thinking about it and for making me cry like a three year old.

I was also listening to 'Fly away' from Dragon World so it just added to the full effect.

Thank you. No words can describe how much i enjoyed this, but Thank you for writing it.

I will never get this out of my head! lol

insanely yours

gollumfryingeggs

*sniff* this story actually had me crying!

your work is so wonderful, the way you capture the emotions into words, it's beautiful.

thank you so much for this :)

magnus should die! freakin a%#hole!

You know, this is like the sixth (or something like that) story of yours I have read, (in only the past two days - but, hey, it's winter break! I don't have anything else to do!) and after reading this story, I have come to a conclusion.

And that conclusion is (wait for it!...) you are AWESOME at writing! You are one those people that obviously needs to be published already! :D Keep writing, 'cause i will definitely keep reading (meaning log on every five minutes and see if you've written any more.)

Poor kitty. Poor Gunther. : (

Very nice and sweet, though. I liked the bit at the end, where Gunther finds another cat.

Yeah, the stuff about cats and witches is true. Having a cat was one of the main factors for "proving" if you were a witch or not.

Very moving. There is just so much of Gunther that nobody sees and you were able to show some of this darkness in a short piece. It's bittersweet and touching and quite sad. A worthwhile read.

Oh, the softer side of Gunther. Him and a kitten is too cute esp. how he was excited that Shade was a boy cat, "boys don't need to be pretty"...haha. But his dad is such an a*hole, now we know why Gunther is the way he is. I really like the ending. Together Jane and the one-eyed cat can open Gunther up.

So... being rather new to this fandom, I was sort of expecting to see a boring arrangement of stories written by, like, eight year olds. Or none at all.

And then I get stuff like this, and everything's just awesome.

So, yeah, Gunther totally aww-able. And the kitten even more. I sort of guessed it was going to either run away or be killed, but then you have Gunther digging a GRAVE and my eyes watered a bit.

He needs a bit hug, seriously.

Thank you so much for giving the world heart-tugging fanfiction for mushy fans like me to find. :)

1st thing that came to mind: Gunther's dad is evil. Second thing that came to mind: aw...

Definitly liked this, cause it gives us a look at the differences between Gunther and his father.

Aww... that was so cute! Poor Gunther, though... :'( at least he has a new friend now. I always thought his father was corrupting him.

Wow this story actually had me in tears and thats hard to do CONGRATS it was a great oneshot:)

Love it! Great spacing between the times. I love your descriptions, and the imagery is amazing. There was no awkward phrasings that drew me out of the flow. I noticed a bit of a change in narration from when Gunther was a boy, and modern- the dialgoue was definately different.

I love the ending- I'm happy that you managed to find a good way to end it. CONGRATS.

KrisEleven~